Reviewed By: martianbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2010 21:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
That is soo short that I can't even get a sense of your writing style. You should have at least 3 typed pages on Microsoft Office Word before you try to beg for reviews. However, I'll indulge you, admitting I'm curious how you will explain the spirit world completely disappearing. No ratings though and can't really tell you anything else because this passage is way too short.
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