| "Nightmares" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 05:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
please continue ur stoies all of them are just unfinish and its killing me T-T i wanna know what happens in all of them T-T
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Reviewed By: fireyashakaco [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, ok you did reveiw my story, so i'll reveiw yours. Well to be honest it sucked. lol, jk. I think it's awsome and you should keep writing! Only one complaint. You got Nakau's laugh wrong. ("Ah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!" Naraku chuckled maniacly as Kagura and Kanna watched on.) Naraku says cucucucucu, not ha ha ha ha. But it was good. Oh and the reason I write short chapters is because I'm not very smart and lose my enery when I write long chapters, plus I have some sirus writers block.....
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Reviewed By: krilaia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 19:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awsomeness! Well I think so anyways. Cool plot. I wanna read more! T_T well cool so far!
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