| "Missing pieces" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: seththegreatsuckitdry On: September 04, 2005 03:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
welll uhhh it sure was ......sexual......wellll.....thats pretty much all i got outta it
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Title: Missing Pieces
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 16:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185(not logged in) On: September 01, 2005 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a little sad. But It's a great story!!! Hope you update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Chibes [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 19:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
loving the story and waiting for updates
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Title: KICK ASS
Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE WOULD U PLEASE UPDATE CAUSE I WANNA KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT SO AS SOON AS U CAN UPDATE. Ja Mata Airy
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Title: KICK ASS
Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE WOULD U PLEASE UPDATE CAUSE I WANNA KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT SO AS SOON AS U CAN UPDATE. Ja Mata Airy
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Reviewed By: dARK sOUL On: August 25, 2005 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!!Cant wait!!!1
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 14:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh please updte soon!! Your killing me!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*falls off chair* *Gets back on the chair* Wow, Great story!!!!! Please update ASAP!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Angel of Anime and Demons and Crossovers [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 10:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your a Genius! Now on with the story PLEASE I AM ANTICIPATING YOUR CONTINUATION OF THIS FANFICTION!
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Title: Missing Pieces
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 13:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Hiei and Kagome please?
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Title: Rainstorm61879
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 05:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Evil you are pure and complete evil...well almost but you need to update you can't just tease with that little tidbit. Updat update update. Or I swear I'll show you true evil. I'll find you and start singing the song that never ends until you crack break down beg for mercy and finish the story.
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Reviewed By: Yabun [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 22:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, 3/4 of the Spirit Detectives lusting after the little miko? I do hope she has built up her stamina, she'll need it. Ja ne! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 19:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
A very intiguing start, I don't believe I've seen a Yusuke/Kurama/Kag/Hiei square as of yet. I think I'd throw myself into a body of water as well if I had a dream like that. I can only imagine what they will be thinking when they find out their dreamgirl is real. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dark Soul On: August 17, 2005 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ONG!!! You have to updATE!!!! I cant wait!!! Can you make your chapters real long? I think I read to much ;)
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