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Reviewed By: kuronueslover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2010 01:02 CST
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awesomeness! i love this story! i cant wait to see how kagome will react to seeing shippo and sesshomaru again. will kagome be goin to makai with the team? will she meet keiko? also, when will they all come out with there pasts to each other? pls update soon, author-sama! i cant wait to see how this progresses! and if its not too much to ask, how often do you update?
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2010 05:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally got around to checking my email... and low and behold one of my favorite fics from so long ago was updated! I had to reread the entire thing to remember it but I enjoy this fic too much to mind; stayed up until 6:30am to do it too. I found myself getting angry with Keiko repeatedly, but she redeemed herself a bit in this last chapter; glad to see Yusuke's going after someone he deserves- and damn if Kagome doesn't deserve people that want her above others. On to the Hiei/Kagome issue. NO NO NO NO... do not take him out of the loop. It would mess up your entire intro to the story- along with the part of their dreams connecting them. The second I read that question of yours my mind flooded with a ton of ideas you could use to get them together. Unfortunately, there is a limit to how much one can type in a review so email me or IM me or whatever if you're interested in any ideas. If it helps my case any I took fiction writing as a course in college last semester and got an 'A' so I won't likely let you down if that's anything to go by. Write well- I am off to much needed sleep. -DuskenDreamer PS I think this is the longest review I've ever written. You have a damn good story on your hands and I can't wait to see more of it.
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Reviewed By: kura- fan On: January 02, 2010 13:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!!!!! O.O I think a three way relationship with Kurama, Yusuke, and Kagome works, but if Hiei is going to be in there too then he needs to get his act together lol. The training sessions should work :3 *huggles* but thank you for not leaving us!!! we readers need you and your lovely magnitude of words. Keep up the good work and damnit up date soon!! XD
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Reviewed By: sailorstormmaker [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your story!
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Title: update soon!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: BloodForbiddenVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please do update soon i really want to read a kur/kag/yus lemon
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Reviewed By: BloodForbiddenVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 22:00 CDT
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please do update soon i really want to read a kur/kag/yus lemon
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 00:24 CDT
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this is a good story, i hope you update it soon
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Title: more please
Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2008 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. please update soon. I want to know what happens the morning after plus I would like to know how they are going to work everything with Kagome.
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 22:20 CDT
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UPDATE!! PLEASE!! UPDATE!! PLEASE!! UPDATE!! PLEASE!! UPDATE!! PLEASE!! UPDATE!! PLEASE!! UPDATE!! PLEASE!! UPDATE!! PLEASE!! UPDATE!! PLEASE!! UPDATE!! PLEASE!! UPDATE!! PLEASE!! UPDATE!! PLEASE!! UPDATE!! PLEASE!!
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Title: DAMN THAT WAS HOT!!!
Reviewed By: missingnin0x0 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was possibly the best lemon I have ever read(and I've read A LOT of lemons, stupid hentai mind...), damn it was hot! Dude, you're an awesome writer and I can't wait til the next chapter. By the way...will there be more lemons in the near future? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Update again soon. Can't wait to read about the dust/evil come back for Kagome, and what the SDs' do about protecting her. Also if any of the Inu gang show back up besides Shippo.
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Title: That Was HOT!!!
Reviewed By: KageOokami69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 04:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was probably one of the hottest yaoi lemons i've ever read! I'm hoping to see alot more of this in the future. I love the wqay this story is going so far. I've only ever seen one other fanfic with a Hiei/Kag/Kurama/Yusuke pairing and this one is probably much better than the other one, and thats saying something because I was very impressed with the other fic. Please Update Soon!!!
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Reviewed By: BlackRoseKnight On: December 21, 2007 02:39 CST
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Hun love the fic. THo not too crazy about the Yaoi, lol but YOur doin a great job :) Can't wait to see what you come up with next LOVE YOU!
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that was sooo freakin HOT!!!!!! i totally love it!! PLEASE up date as soon as u can!!!! ja!
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Title: Missing Pieces
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 17:42 CST
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You are so lucky that you decided to post this chapter ... because I was about to go MAD! Homer-mad too. Where he said "No T.V and beer makes Homer go crazy" - for me; "No story makes Sapphire go crazy". You are one lucky child. :)
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