| "Why Do I Care?" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Zeva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Like! Aside from a few grammar and spelling errors you have a really neat story. I especially liked the part on Kia's thoughts at the end of Ch. 3. Your writing seemed stronger in that area. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: _Dream_ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 21:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi your fanfic is great!!!:) so......WHENS THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!???sorry.love the story pls update!
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Reviewed By: kasumifan On: August 03, 2005 01:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
i think the fanfic's great you should definately continue writing the fic. i hope u get the next chapter up soon
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