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| "Horrible Day" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 07:31 CDT
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Yeah, Shizuka was a bit outta character, but this was still a good fic ^^ Keep up the good work
| Reviewed By: =LadyGrey= On: July 20, 2005 23:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was cute. There aren't enough yuri stories out there for YGO, but that might be because most of the female chars are so annoying. Anyway, I don't think Shizuka (which would probably be shortened to 'zuka, not Shi, btw) was that much out of character since you explained she'd been through a lot, and I think you have her voice down very well. Oh, and a tiny nipicking thing, about a third of the way through you used the word "quite" when you meant "quit". Just trying to help. Ja ne! =^..^= LG
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