| "Ears and Tails" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: mei_kouhai_kitsune(nli) On: March 01, 2006 23:30 CST
Comment/Review:
THAT ROCKED WOOT GO RITSUKA AND SOUBI great story I love your work. I wish I had a slave. RIght now I'll settle for pet lol.
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Reviewed By: Kyo of Yukyshi On: February 27, 2006 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it ^-^ but my only complaint is the misspelling of Japanese words in you stories..not just this one, but I've noticed it before...don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to be mean or anything...but I'm taking japanese and it hits me like a ton of bricks...>_< but anyway, I still like your work!
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Reviewed By: ChibiChula [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 02:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. Ritsuka acting so jealous and possesive is fun. Plus, I've got a serious weakness for collars and leashes. ^_^; The only tiny complaint I have is the ages. In both manga and anime, Ritsuka is 12 (in sixth grade) and Soubi is 20 (in college/university). That means there is an eight year age gap. You might want to change the ages you used or slap an AU warning on the story. Oh, and there's a few typos in there. Too lazy to find and point them out to you though, since it's bedtime for me. Anyway, nice work! ^__^
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Reviewed By: rAiNwAtEr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 14:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I thought your story was very cute. I wish there were more stories with this pairing. I don't like to read stories were the main pairing is Semie and Soubi. I hope to see more work from you in the future.
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Title: Ello!
Reviewed By: GothicFox from Gaia On: August 04, 2005 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was ssoooo sweet! I loved it! *does a happy dance and squeals for joy* ^_^
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Title: AWWW!!!!
Reviewed By: Shemai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 07:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT'S SO SWEET!!! Another great fic! This is one of my absolute favorites! It's so sweet!!
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