| "The Hanyou Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: hi
Reviewed By: Inuyashas lover 2 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it i hope you'll update soon. i make 14 so i hope you'll post up two chapters? please? i want to know how this story will play out. it very hard to find good slave fanfic and i think this will turn out good.update soon. ^.^
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Reviewed By: kagome789 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz continue
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: Inuyashas lover 2 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
hi i love your stories i just started reading The Princess Slave and this one and i like it. i added you to my fav and i hope you'll update soon. i love slave stories and i love yours
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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 01:43 CST
Comment/Review:
will you be updating this fic? Please?!
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Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 On: September 11, 2005 05:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok... You Havent updated?! Whats with that!? o.o PLEASE update ^^ I just read Your Other Fanfiction 'The Princess Slave' And I loved it. It was awsome so could you update that as well!?!? Hehehe alot of Updating And so little Time yeah I know But Your really good with the whole 'slave' thing and I love slave storys with Inuyasha and Kagome!
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Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 On: August 30, 2005 05:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT! I loved it sp PLease Write More! I wanna know what happens! do you think You could maybe do a really long chapter next?
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Reviewed By: angryhippyXer On: August 07, 2005 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon, i was really interested. It was just so short.it was a tease
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Seventh. >:)
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Reviewed By: Dancing_One [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 00:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it so far. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: sesshysgirl56 On: July 14, 2005 18:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice fic I cant wait to see whats next, plesw update soon!
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 18:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
LUV UR STORY PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!=)
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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 16:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm interested in reading more. Nice opening to the story. Hope you'll be able to update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas lover 2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well I like it so far it is short and i hope you'll make them longer as you go so please up date soon and I hope you get 7 reviews so i can get the next chapter. you'll be in my favs, so i'll be watching. good job and keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: RedHerring (not signed in) On: July 13, 2005 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a very informative chapter. I would suggest writing longer chapters, even if it takes longer to get them out. You don't have to end a chapter with a scene./// You also didn't have very much description. A long descriptive piece about the surroundings or a particular object is really the way an author can show off their skill.
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