| "Final Dance of the Fallen Dove" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 18:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, you brought this story foward, but it still isn't finished. I'd like to see more to it, a complete story, if you could. Neh, whatever, later.
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Reviewed By: Bijou-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Awesome story! I really love it, and I cant wait to continue reading it!
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Reviewed By: GonzoPrime [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy snap, crackle and pop am I enjoying this. I really really really like it. This...just might have a happy ending over all. Lord knows Raven deserves it.
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Reviewed By: The Fallen Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 14:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome! But please, no clliffhangers...it kills us readers on the inside. SO c'mon, lets see some more of your remarkable writing! ^_^
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Reviewed By: gohanstrife [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 01:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Come on now, leave it up to the reader to figure things out, or are we going to get another chapter up here to set my curiosity straight? What could Blackfire want? And what's the cliche with Raven wielding a sword of black energy? o_O It's all good though, I always see Raven with a sword. She is a demon after all...
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