| "Magic is Just Around the Corner" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: clusterlizard1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the truth telling stuff is called 'Veritaserum'. maybe she drinks the water with the veritaserum in it but she is able to fight off the effects with her miko powers and her mental barriers. then she could retreat futher into herself after feeling betrayed by the group. i think you should have snape try to oclumency on her and they get into a fight that dumbledore has to break up (you know, a colossal fight where they destroy half the quidditch pitch. there are my suggestions. when she was sorted by the hat, that was awesome! ~clusterlizard1
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Title: inuyasha_1234
Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 11:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello I just wanted to say that this is an awsome fic and I can't wait to find out what happens, I've found a fic before that used the same idea and really, that author just doesn't have the same amount of talent that you have. I hope that you decide to perhaps continue with this fic, I'll be waiting for you to update ^^ With love, Mari-chan
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 13:47 CST
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Chapter 3: Well, I'm not really sure how to spell the name of the game played upon brooms, but I am fairly certain that it is 'Quidditch.' However, if I prove to be incorrect, please remember that I warned you that I was not certain.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 13:42 CST
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Chapter 2: Okay, you made a lot of spelling errors. I'm sorry if you are offended, but I just thought I should tell you, since you asked about the thestrals. (That is how they are spelled, by the way). Also, Gryffindor and Slytherin. Probably a few others as well, but I forget them. Perhaps you could return to the books for a refresher? I think you should... But don't trust me.
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Title: Hi!
Reviewed By: airwalk55 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 17:07 CST
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I noticed that your last update was July of 2005. I hope you'll still be continuing this fic as well as your others. They're all awesome! Please please please continue! ^____^
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Reviewed By: kaw12 On: August 08, 2005 17:09 CDT
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please up date soon this is really good
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Reviewed By: I'm crazy about Ed On: July 25, 2005 20:14 CDT
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this story is great kagome should put mawfoy in the hospital wing it has to be some thing so danm funny like what mem8 wrote
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Reviewed By: mem8 On: July 20, 2005 17:32 CDT
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pleeze update you know you shoud make kagome make pro.snape fly over the forbbin forest and drop right in the middle of it because he made mad it whoud soooo funny
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Reviewed By: mrw13 On: July 19, 2005 16:03 CDT
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pleeze update very soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: chap 3
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 15:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: HanyouBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE NOW!!! i LUVED it.... Oh and also think Kagome should have been in straight Gryffindor....NO SLYTHERIN!*GAGS* but I like it anyways.
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Reviewed By: go_die6790 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! plz update! Inuyasha and Harry potter are like my fave! plz plz plz update soon!
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Title: It's the dreaded me!
Reviewed By: Chezlesea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! It's me... again! Kagome259/Chezlesea strikes again!
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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: regretfully-yours-cassy-chan On: July 14, 2005 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: Ummm... Hi? On: July 13, 2005 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!!! your stiry was very good any I can't find anything that I would want to critisize about it. And that is saying something.
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