| "The Sisters of Tian inn" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: why
Reviewed By: i-love-inus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pwease write more and i love tasuki to and along with tamahome oh and koga from inuyasha ^_^
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Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 21:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
It seems like a typical fanfic love story.It started out good and then it seemed like you got imapatient and there wasn't much detail and the writing just seemed rushed. Do you know what I mean? Also, you kept switching from past tense to present tense which got really annoying. Just pick one or the other. Personally I enjoy past tense best. But I did like how the names were Chinese. That's a good thing considering that most of the fushiggi Yuugi fanfics have Japanese names even though it takes place in China. Overall I'd say you have a pretty good story going here but maybe some changes could be for the better. Keep up the good work. Don't read the one below this, my computer has been messing up. Sorry.
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Title: okay
Reviewed By: Rekka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems like a typical fanfic love story. It started out good and then it seemed like yIt seems like a typical fanfic love story. It started out good and then it seemed like you got imapatient and there wasn\'t much detail and the writing just seemed rushed. Do you know what I mean? Also, you kept switching from past tense to present tense which got really annoying. Just pick one or the other. Personally I enjoy past tense best. But I did like how the names were Chinese. That\'s a good thing considering that most of the fushiggi Yuugi fanfics have Japanese names even though it takes place in China. Overall I\'d say you have a pretty good story going here but maybe some changes ould be for the better. Keep up the good work.ou got imapatient and there wasn\\\'t much detail and the writing just seeme rushed. Do you know what I mean? Also, you kept switching from past tense to present tense which got really annoying. Just pick one or the other. Personally I enjoy past tense best. But I did like how the names were Chinese. That\\\'s a good thing considering that most of the fushiggi Yuugi fanfics have Japanese names even though it takes place in China. Overall I\\\'d say you have a pretty good story going here but maybe some changes would be for the better. Keep up the good work.
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Title: LOOOOOOOOVVVVVE IT!!!!!!
Reviewed By: InnocentInu118 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH I LOVE IT SOOOOO MUCH!!!!I don't really read these fics that much but you did a ok job!!!!And thanks for telling me in the first place!!!!Oh can you check out my fics please,I mean I'm not getting alot of reviews,so could you like review so I can be happy!!!^__^
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Sorcha_namida [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 12:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
really neat story...SO NOW WHO'S BLUE_PHOENIX17???!!! *gasps for air* okay. Well funny, and really good. I give you kouga as your prize!
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