"A dance in the Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Tora_chan259 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 11:33 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *Ah.... I should tell you.... I've never written such a long review before so please dont think I'm some idiot that wastes peoples time with her useless babble. (Even if I kinda do in person.... lol) Please always keep that pasion and description in your writings.... You have a definete gift of sucking people into the story.... ~Tora
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Title: Kudos, talented stranger.... Reviewed By: Tora_chan259 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 11:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Shit... That made me cry... And I'm not really a Kikyou fan either... I mean I'm not a hater but I'm certainly not a fan... *and do kinda enjoy it when shes portrayed as a villan (feels guilty about it.... TT_TT;;;;)* But DAMN!!!!! This is FUCKIN AMAZING!!!!!!!! I mean you went into such great detail... I could picture it all and almost feel it..... It did kinda make me start thinking it was going to be Kagome *which irked me a tad* but (still not a Kikyou basher but will NEVER want her to be with Inuyasha... hes just too passionate for an emotionless.... uhm... onna.... like her....) Also..... I'm going to tell you now... When i give ratings and reviews, I have NEVER given all 10's... Just thought that would brighten your day *atleast I hope so..... lol* Sorry for this long ass review.... But, I think it's better than leaving multiple reviews (which I did with the last fic I read (*the idiot kept switching pov's in the same sentences...* (like saying "I" talking about Kagome-chan and then, still talking about herself, say her...) it drove me crazy....) But, yeah... I don't cry... And I shed quite a few tears for this... You are an amazing author so please keep writing.... *lol now it sounds like I'm kissing ass... but I mean what I say...* Okay! Enough of my babbling... Thanks for your patience with reading this long review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Tora
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 12:24 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Oh...Wow! that was so good!!!!!!!!!!!! i'll add it straight to my favs. your story was cute and very admirable because it doesn't really flaunt anybody *i'm a kikyo hater, but i do feel some sympathy for her* i really liked the story and your so good at describing feelings ^.^ good work!! *wow, i sound kinda like as ass kissing idiot, but :p*
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Reviewed By: Sinashi On: December 26, 2005 11:16 CST Comment/Review: oh thank god. I thought thta you were talking about Kagome. Anyways, HA! YOU SUC KIKYO! That's what ya get. *sticks out tongue* Anyways great story. I've gotta go though so bye. P.S nice line about her heart waking up and then stabbing itself.
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Reviewed By: Tormented Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 17:22 CDT Comment/Review: hey that was a really good one-shot. good job. (and just between me and whoever reads this, i don't like kikyo)
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Title: not signed in Reviewed By: inuhanyou2 On: July 15, 2005 06:29 CDT Comment/Review: Wow! You made me cry! I thought you were talking about Kagome... I'm not really a Kikyo fan, but.....yeah... You're a very talented author!!! I love your stories!
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Reviewed By: shadowcat_012 On: July 14, 2005 16:10 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey, that was good! Even though it did irk me that Kikyou had thought of killing Kagome...oh, well, she didn't. Keep it up. It really was good!
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