| "Family Portrait" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: lalala On: July 10, 2002 12:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was such a saad fic. but i still loved it( although things like this always happen in live, which is terribly sad)you SHOULD continue this fic. (maybe tell what happens when the parents found out that bra was hearing and stuff ....if they ever find out)) oh well i still love this fic write more plz. |
Reviewed By: Lee_Chan On: May 12, 2002 11:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
aww this is so sad! it's so real too! i hope bulma and vegeta relize soon what they are doing to their kids! you should write a fanfic about that it would be soooooo good lol |
Reviewed By: kandi On: February 02, 2002 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so sad it made me want to cry. I really hope they get bck together?? |
Reviewed By: Felidae On: December 29, 2001 05:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so sad ... are you going to continue this? I hope so, because it's very very good! |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2001 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely wonderful piece of work you have here. Sadly believable, too. You really brought out the pain, and that makes it seem very real. Very good, very very good. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2001 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo! Well done. This is exactly how me and my little brother felt when our parents were breaking up. My brothr would try to block it out while couldn't help but hear it all. Nice job on your first fic. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 27, 2001 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really heartbreaking. My bro and I never went thru anything like this, but some of our friends did. They usually would end up running away. I wish all adults would read this and see what it's like from a kid's pov. Peace |
