| "Life Is But A Dream" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: nice-day [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 09:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very entertaining, if a little disturbing (Hawaiian shirt... nyyeeuuh...).
The story is well paced, and the use of a light writing style kept the prose from weighing down the humour. As for the various frightening twists and turns, they just begged me to keep reading right up until the final horror was revealed.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!"
Indeed.
Excellent work. |
Reviewed By: Janeth JavaG Rhian On: June 11, 2003 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was suberp! Damn straight funny! |
Reviewed By: ann ime [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so funny! I'm still smiling. |
Reviewed By: shawn b On: June 11, 2002 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was TOO funny!!!!!! PLEASE do a sequel because that was too funny!!!!!! Poor Spike; he's stuck with a fat version of Faye as a wife, Ed as a child, Vicious and Julia as neighbors, and the ever-lovable Ein as a pet. It was also funny to read about Jet being spike's boss.I almost died laughing from Spike's scream at the end.HAHAHAHAHA*chokes on some spit* Hahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Cortney On: February 23, 2002 09:55 CST
Comment/Review:
LOL!!! That story sent me to the floor! I can just picture it...Spike having to work with Judy and Punch, Jet still his boss. His neighbors being his true love, and what he thought was a deranged man loving only death. His wife, the once slim Faye, cocky. Now, only HUGE and...well...still cocky. Ein as the dog...And then to make it even worse....ED! Ed as a child to Spike? LOL! That was the part sending me to the ground when she yelled "Papa!" LIke she did n that one episode!!! LOL! *Cough* Sorry...But I loved it! Very imaginitive. Ever thought of perhaps continuing? |
Reviewed By: Swasdiva On: December 27, 2001 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The entire story was priceless!!! Absolutely priceless!! I loved it! I agree with everyone, the vicious/julia part was hilarious...why couldn't that have been an actual Bebop episode? |
Reviewed By: bratkitty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2001 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Creepy, like a suburban twilight zone. I thought the part with Vicious was hilarious. The part with Faye was pretty good too, I've god a pretty good visual of what she'd look like. |
Reviewed By: Stokley On: September 03, 2001 03:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh.mi.god.
I almost fell off my chair laughing when i read the part describing Viscious.
Gawd, you've gotta write a sequal!!! |
Reviewed By: WinterLaurel On: September 29, 2001 05:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Visions of Hell....*shudders* Suburbia. Frightening! |
Reviewed By: WinterLaurel On: September 29, 2001 05:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Visions of Hell....*shudders* Suburbia. Frightening! I agree with Stokes, you should finish this vision of Hell! |
Reviewed By: Nate Grey On: October 14, 2001 13:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah, that was fun. Especially the last few lines. I look forward to more of your stuff. |
Reviewed By: kay On: October 24, 2001 23:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
You are good a nagging wife a child a neighbor and his wife a rich brother spike in a crazy world. You are really good. Make spike do something crazy c'mon. An average family tv show almost or not You have a very good writing skill and great creativity. Trust me I'm a language professor at burkley |
