| "The Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Title: Meanie
Reviewed By: KitsuneforlifeYokoschick [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 11:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
You are going to leave us hanging with a cliff hanger like that I mean she finally made a good move on Yoko close to starting a lemon and you end ;_;please hurry and update
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Reviewed By: lezzo On: September 29, 2005 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great hope update soon very soon !!!!!!!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: KitsuneforlifeYokoschick [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 21:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is excellent and have her lighten up to Yoko you know melt off of a caressing touch from him
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Reviewed By: yokofan On: August 31, 2005 06:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is for the poll I think that yoko should get some action to. but anywho I love this story and I hope you continue it
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Reviewed By: SakuraFox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Youko should get a least some action ^_~. But still have it as a Suuichi/Rain fix most of the time. Plz update soon. Looking forward to a new chapter. -SakuraFox
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Reviewed By: KitsuneforlifeYokoschick [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 06:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Have Yoko have some action please you should have one full chapter with nothing but Yoko sorry I am just obsessed
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Title: vote!
Reviewed By: weirdangel On: August 28, 2005 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i think that it doesnt really matter it would be cool if they both get a lil action every now and then. yeh know lyk 'taking turns' haha thats my opinion awesome story hope yeh keep written!!!
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: August 28, 2005 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah let youko have some fun too.
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Title: YAy!!!
Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko89 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 08:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was wonderful!!! I loved it!!! Oh and I definatly think Youko should be let in on the action!!! You are sooo goin on my faves list so please do go on~!!~ :3
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: KitsuneforlifeYokoschick [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 09:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay another cliffhanger *sarcasm*. Update soon please I love this fic I do I do I do
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Reviewed By: Shio On: August 10, 2005 10:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!! Write more I need to know what happens next. please!!
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Reviewed By: wlkby27 (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 19:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
good story update soon
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 18:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
that is probably one of the worst cliffhangers I've ever seen! gaaa!!! I've seen them right before, but never in the middle!!!! Oh, and I just started reading, so.....ya, I don't wait till it's convinient for me to review, I review as soon as I read. oh, and update soon please
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: August 03, 2005 21:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
*shaking fist in the air* cures you and your cliff hangers XD
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: nightangel15 not logged in On: July 29, 2005 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really nice fic. the story is original, and i like the characters. please update soon!!
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