| "Something More" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: elemetal neko211 On: July 26, 2005 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write the next chapter it is a great stoire i vote for kag/ed
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was good. Plz continue with this.
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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon On: July 26, 2005 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Version 2, mainly 'cause if Souta died Kagome would most likely go nuts and go on a killing spree. So I think that you should have then get attacked and both get hurt but Kagome mor then Souta, have the Ed and Al see Souta geting med and stuff for his sister and they look in to it. You don't have to use what I've given but I figured I'ed put it out therefor you to use. Please get the next chapter out soon. I loke it so far and can't wait to see what you do. SMILE ^_~
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Reviewed By: MidNight-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 20:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ed/Kagome
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Reviewed By: MidNight-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 20:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
version 1
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 18:58 CDT
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Go with Souta lives, Kagome gets hurt. Plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: gothic fuzzies [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 22:22 CDT
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It's really good so far. I vate for version 2 please 'cause Souta is one of my fav characters. Also can the pairing be Roy/Ed/Kagome? PWEASE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kagsessdaughter Silver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 21:09 CDT
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VERSION 2, VERSION 2 PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: chap 2
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 01:22 CDT
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i pick version two, because i love Souta, hes really adorable and i usually laugh when ever hes involved in anything, plus, Kagome would be all sad about it and thats a real downer, plus, Souta should be there to help Kagome with things whilst shes injured to show their sibling bond. please update soon
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: July 22, 2005 21:07 CDT
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I would choose the version where Sota's alive but Kagome's injured badly. i don't like character deaths very much unless I REALLY hate that certain character, Like Kikyo. (Damn Clay Bitch) Anyway, Update soon. And I promise to make a Lemon once you request it.
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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
for pairings i vote Roy/Edward/Kagome. it was good for a first chapter, please update soon
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Reviewed By: kagsessdaughter Silver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats all i want more this is really good
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Reviewed By: Yabun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 21:36 CDT
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Ooo, Interesting story so far. Not sure which pairing I'll vote for though. I wonder how Ed's automail would come into play during...um...stuff. That point definately deserves some thought, scratch that, much thought. ^.~ Anyways! I noticed you corrected your spelling on 'youkai' halfway through the chapter, good good. Thanks for writing! Ja ne! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: July 17, 2005 04:24 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm liking the story so far. But why did Souta run away from Ed and Al, like they were bad or something? How will KAgome meet up with Ed and Roy? Oh, and I'd like vote for the Roy/Kagome/Ed threesome pairing. I'd be more than happy to write a chapter with the lemon for you. But since I don't have an account with MM.Org, I'll give you my e-mail in case you want to reply to me about the lemon chapter. My e-mail is KuramasFoxyMiko@hotmail.com (Hope you update soon.)
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Reviewed By: Jennyxoox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I love Inuyasha/Fma cross over so i'll keep reading to see where you go with it. I like the story so far update asap.
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