| "Something More" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Title: kag/ed
Reviewed By: moomoo2 On: August 20, 2005 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it countiue please kagome/ed
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Reviewed By: CUTE ANGEL....... JA On: August 20, 2005 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS GREAT. I LOOOOVVVVVVEEEE IT. I VOTE EDXKAG. UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: ilovegoku On: August 03, 2005 23:24 CDT
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GREAT STORY, I LOVE IT!!! UPDATE SOON. EdwardxKagome
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Reviewed By: Jubei-chan the Mystik On: August 03, 2005 23:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hm, this is an interesting fanfic. I vote Kagome/Edward.
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Reviewed By: Protector of Dreams On: August 03, 2005 23:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story so far. Keep it up!!! ^_^ I LOVE IT. I vote Kagome/Edward
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Title: E-mail: KuramasFoxyMiko@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: July 27, 2005 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Getting good. Getting good. I'm really liking it so far. Could you have Kagome humiliate a low-rank officer in front of our favorite group of guys? And what's Kagome's uniform of? A short skirt, skort (Shorts that look like a skirt from the front, in case you don't know), khaki slacks, or short shorts? Just wondering, because there's a lot of waitress' who wear those. Anyway, hope you update soon. And don't hesitate to e-mail me if you need ideas or a lemon.
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 01:02 CDT
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oh yes, I forgot to vote. I will place my vote on Mustang/Kagome, because they are so cute together ^__~ ~Tsuki(again)
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 01:01 CDT
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So far I enjoy this story. Very, very original. I guess I'll just have to wait and watch as the fireworks go off when everyone meets, now, wont I? ~Tsuki
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Reviewed By: elemetal neko211 On: July 26, 2005 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write the next chapter it is a great stoire i vote for kag/ed
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was good. Plz continue with this.
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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon On: July 26, 2005 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Version 2, mainly 'cause if Souta died Kagome would most likely go nuts and go on a killing spree. So I think that you should have then get attacked and both get hurt but Kagome mor then Souta, have the Ed and Al see Souta geting med and stuff for his sister and they look in to it. You don't have to use what I've given but I figured I'ed put it out therefor you to use. Please get the next chapter out soon. I loke it so far and can't wait to see what you do. SMILE ^_~
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Reviewed By: MidNight-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 20:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ed/Kagome
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Reviewed By: MidNight-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 20:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
version 1
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 18:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Go with Souta lives, Kagome gets hurt. Plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: gothic fuzzies [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 22:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's really good so far. I vate for version 2 please 'cause Souta is one of my fav characters. Also can the pairing be Roy/Ed/Kagome? PWEASE!!!!!
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