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Reviewed By: kagsessdaughter Silver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 21:09 CDT
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VERSION 2, VERSION 2 PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: chap 2
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 01:22 CDT
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i pick version two, because i love Souta, hes really adorable and i usually laugh when ever hes involved in anything, plus, Kagome would be all sad about it and thats a real downer, plus, Souta should be there to help Kagome with things whilst shes injured to show their sibling bond. please update soon
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: July 22, 2005 21:07 CDT
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I would choose the version where Sota's alive but Kagome's injured badly. i don't like character deaths very much unless I REALLY hate that certain character, Like Kikyo. (Damn Clay Bitch) Anyway, Update soon. And I promise to make a Lemon once you request it.
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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
for pairings i vote Roy/Edward/Kagome. it was good for a first chapter, please update soon
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Reviewed By: kagsessdaughter Silver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats all i want more this is really good
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Reviewed By: Yabun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 21:36 CDT
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Ooo, Interesting story so far. Not sure which pairing I'll vote for though. I wonder how Ed's automail would come into play during...um...stuff. That point definately deserves some thought, scratch that, much thought. ^.~ Anyways! I noticed you corrected your spelling on 'youkai' halfway through the chapter, good good. Thanks for writing! Ja ne! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Kurama'sFoxyMiko On: July 17, 2005 04:24 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm liking the story so far. But why did Souta run away from Ed and Al, like they were bad or something? How will KAgome meet up with Ed and Roy? Oh, and I'd like vote for the Roy/Kagome/Ed threesome pairing. I'd be more than happy to write a chapter with the lemon for you. But since I don't have an account with MM.Org, I'll give you my e-mail in case you want to reply to me about the lemon chapter. My e-mail is KuramasFoxyMiko@hotmail.com (Hope you update soon.)
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Reviewed By: Jennyxoox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I love Inuyasha/Fma cross over so i'll keep reading to see where you go with it. I like the story so far update asap.
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