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| "Crimson Blood and innocent Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 03:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice very nice./
| Title: FFARG Review (Chapter 1)
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 12:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, first off let me say that this is a fine start to the piece. Now, I realize that you stated that you do not have a beta, or spell check? Are you using Microsoft Word, or some other application to write this? There were a few small spelling mistakes, like: 'Blood pured freely...' This should be: 'Blood poured freely...'. There was another place where you spelled the, teh, but that was just a slip of the fingers. I think you should get yourself a beta reader. A beta should be able to catch those small little things for you, and I have also found that bouncing ideas off your beta is very useful!! Again, great start to this piece. Thanks for submitting this to the FFARG!!
| Reviewed By: dark_rikku_loves_evil122 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic is great as every knows midoriko dies and no one cares so this person did a great jobFont Color
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