| "Schuldig's Punishment" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: futonhow On: April 10, 2009 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeal* wow. that was amazing. despite english not being your first language, you have much better grammar than many native speakers. all i can add is : don't stop writing :)
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Title: n_n
Reviewed By: Mishiru On: November 05, 2007 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are /so/ great. You wrote my fav paring, and with bdsm! *drool* I love you! Please keep writing, and don't listen to those who make unwanted comments. I really thought a lot more people would comment on such wonderful work. I usally do not comment ^_^;, but I found your fic to be so good, and under rated, so I knew I had to. I look forward to reading more, so please keep writing, or if you've written more stuff and you just didn't post it please email it be me at Aurapwns@hotmail.com. Also feel free to chat with me anytime. Is this fic based on an other fic, because I think I read one with the same idea? If you ever need any ideas I'm just an email away! It does matter how far it is from the time I've written this. You must have put so much time, and thought into this fic... Thank you for reading through my long, and boring comment! ^_^;
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Reviewed By: snapy pants [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 22:08 CDT
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I have but one word to describe this yummy-ness: TASTEH!!!!!!! *panting shamelessly*
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: Cesare [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 09:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sooo..how can i excuse? xD I made a mistake..well a.. great mistake..I thought the points which I can give..are like marks..so 1=the best and not that this are points which I can give.. so...I hope you understand how I thought ^^" sorry! so I..give you the points again this time!^.^ Now to the new part..wow..*___* well..poor schu..but I also can understand Brad.. difficult to explain.. but..Brad gets a new slave?o__o;; wanna know who that is..and..what schu will think..well..i would be..angry ^^
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Reviewed By: Cesare [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 15:00 CST
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sorry hab aus versehen die falschen zahlen abgeschickt -.-""" bitte das ignorieren oben..
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Title: wow ^__^
Reviewed By: Cesare [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 14:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, ich hab mal irgendwo gelesen dass du eigentlich aus deutschland kommst, ich hoffe das stimmt ^^ sonst hab ich nen problem..ich kann einfach besser auf deutsch nen commi schreiben als englisch *hüstel* also was ich sagen will: meine absolute lieblingsff! *__*~ sie wird immer besser..vor allem der letzte teil..war einfach nur hammer..schreib bitte weiter T___T ich bin süchtig danach ^__^
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 13:23 CDT
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Interesting. However, considering Schu was 15 at the beginning of this story and is now 17, shouldn't Crawford have educated him far better on his duties in the position by this point. Especially if they have a 24/7 arrangement, which they seem to have. Other than those points, thoroughly enjoyable.
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Reviewed By: Shemai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 06:33 CDT
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Another great chapter!! Sorry I took so long to read it! I've been so busy lately, it's nuts! I really really love this one though! This chapter was really fun! I love the idea behind it! Bwee! I can't wait for the next one too!
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Reviewed By: Cesare On: September 27, 2005 12:50 CDT
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wow..really great..i just laughed when I think of the faces of masamfumi and the others there ^__^" But..you must go on *g* I'm really looking forward to it..well..schu is sooo..great..cant explain it ^^
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Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 08:41 CDT
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that was so creative, original, unique!!!! It was so good. I would have never thought of something like that. I really cannot wait till the next chapter. Continue writing and you will conitnue to hear rom me. ^-^mangaChild420^-^
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Title: Kanny
Reviewed By: SchuldigLiebe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 16:03 CDT
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I know this is basically the same as the Soubi X Seimei fic. I had a story and I wanted to put it in Loveless, but i didn't want to waste it on a show no one reads the fanfiction for... so I made two versions. Sorry if this has disturbed you so greatly Kanny.
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Reviewed By: Kanny On: September 23, 2005 14:14 CDT
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this is a copycat verison of the Soubi Seimei story you did, I didn't like it because of that. I was just all. Wow..I read this ready.
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Reviewed By: Cesare On: September 21, 2005 09:10 CDT
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please go on! thats the story i like most!!^__^ Looking forward to it.. I love the pairing..its my favourite one! so dont stop here u-u
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Title: AWWW!!!
Reviewed By: Shemai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 01:02 CDT
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AWW! That was such a sweet chapter! I really really love this fic! Again, CUTENESS! ^___^ I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Title: Constructive Criticism
Reviewed By: amythestmage [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 13:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have three/four comments/questions. First, why are the ages set at 15 and 20? Is it for the thrill of underage activity or just pointless? Second, the shameless begging occurring at the end of each chapter is a sticky point. Such comments will only yield unconstructive "Post more" comments that fail to address problems within the story/formatting, and are not a stolid foundation to base skills upon. Gathering support is something most authors prefer, but in this manner, the errors continually appearing within early chapters are continuing unchecked. Namely the improper usage of word forms. For example, 'phallic,' an adjective for something shaped like a phallus, is used as a noun. Not only is this poor grammar, it is distracting. And while I understand that there are numerous reasons for less than sterling grammar, there is assistance around, such as beta readers (in fact, the news has an article concerning the beta reader section located in the forum). Too often are mistakes left uncorrected in the wake of flattering reviews (especially when said reviews are begged for) and as such, have the potential to weaken an author's work and talent. On the same note, bartering reviews for parts of the story seems to negate the 'oneshot' classification of the story; perhaps it would be better posted as an Alternate Universe (explaning the ages/situations) or an original. I'm not saying how to write in this, just voicing a personal opinion to a fellow fanfic writer. -amythestmage
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