| "Schuldig's Punishment" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Title: Kanny
Reviewed By: SchuldigLiebe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 16:03 CDT
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I know this is basically the same as the Soubi X Seimei fic. I had a story and I wanted to put it in Loveless, but i didn't want to waste it on a show no one reads the fanfiction for... so I made two versions. Sorry if this has disturbed you so greatly Kanny.
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Reviewed By: Kanny On: September 23, 2005 14:14 CDT
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this is a copycat verison of the Soubi Seimei story you did, I didn't like it because of that. I was just all. Wow..I read this ready.
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Reviewed By: Cesare On: September 21, 2005 09:10 CDT
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please go on! thats the story i like most!!^__^ Looking forward to it.. I love the pairing..its my favourite one! so dont stop here u-u
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Title: AWWW!!!
Reviewed By: Shemai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 01:02 CDT
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AWW! That was such a sweet chapter! I really really love this fic! Again, CUTENESS! ^___^ I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Title: Constructive Criticism
Reviewed By: amythestmage [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 13:13 CDT
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I have three/four comments/questions. First, why are the ages set at 15 and 20? Is it for the thrill of underage activity or just pointless? Second, the shameless begging occurring at the end of each chapter is a sticky point. Such comments will only yield unconstructive "Post more" comments that fail to address problems within the story/formatting, and are not a stolid foundation to base skills upon. Gathering support is something most authors prefer, but in this manner, the errors continually appearing within early chapters are continuing unchecked. Namely the improper usage of word forms. For example, 'phallic,' an adjective for something shaped like a phallus, is used as a noun. Not only is this poor grammar, it is distracting. And while I understand that there are numerous reasons for less than sterling grammar, there is assistance around, such as beta readers (in fact, the news has an article concerning the beta reader section located in the forum). Too often are mistakes left uncorrected in the wake of flattering reviews (especially when said reviews are begged for) and as such, have the potential to weaken an author's work and talent. On the same note, bartering reviews for parts of the story seems to negate the 'oneshot' classification of the story; perhaps it would be better posted as an Alternate Universe (explaning the ages/situations) or an original. I'm not saying how to write in this, just voicing a personal opinion to a fellow fanfic writer. -amythestmage
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Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE!!! IT'S TOO GOOD!!!! IM DEMANDING IT!!! I WANT IT NOW!!!!! PLEASE? PLEASE? PLEASE? IT'S TOO GOOD TO LEAVE YOUR READERS LET LIKE THAT. I PROMISE TO REVIEW AGAIN!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!! OH PLEASE WRITE MORE OR UPDATE!!!! DO SOMETHING!!!! MangaChild420
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Reviewed By: dita chan On: July 27, 2005 08:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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bloody OCC but I enjoyed every moments of it. bring it on!!!
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Reviewed By: unknowndreams On: July 27, 2005 06:47 CDT
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oooh!! that was good :D hehe u write really well
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Title: BWEEEEEE! ^.^
Reviewed By: Shemai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 23:39 CDT
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Thank you so much for writing more! Thank you thank you thank you! ^.^ I love this fic SO much! Please don't stop. HEY! You other people reading this story and this review...you should take the damn example and review this too! The fic really won't keep going until there're more reviews! Please review! So, back to what I was saying... YOU ROCK! ^.^
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Reviewed By: KsR On: July 26, 2005 01:43 CDT
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Awesome details. Just enough detail and thought that makes this a wonderful fic. I do hope more is forthcoming :D
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Title: review
Reviewed By: SchuldigLiebe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 14:52 CDT
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i like the abuse..... ya
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Title: More
Reviewed By: light5 On: July 22, 2005 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You sure can write. I wait for another chapter! It's great.
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Title: Mean!
Reviewed By: Shemai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was SO mean! Please write more! I HATE cliff hangers! >.< You stopped at such an awesome spot! You're seriously trying to kill your readers aren't you?! *Sob* I just wanna read the awesomely kinky story! I couldn't fricken' beleive it when I saw your note instead of the rest of the fic! AGH! Can I just write four or five reviews in this one to hurry this along?! Please! I wanna read more! Here! Review #1 You rock! Please write more! Review #2 I can't wait for the rest! I really really enjoy the idea behind this fic and the way you're writing their personalities! Review #3 Yes, I'm impatient, but it's only becuase this fic is SO awesome! I'm sure the next chapter'll be just as awesome if not More awesome than the two before it! ^.^ Review #4 I was suprised to see such an awesome fic floating around! Please continue! I love your style and your ideas! Review #5 The way you describe things is GREAT! I love the ideas for the stuff that comes out of "Crawford's magic bag". I'm also really interested to find out how Schuldig'll cope with his costume. How Crawford will deal with Schuldig "Forgetting" the kitty ears and how the other masters will react to Schuldig! Ok! I've written you at LEAST five reviews! Please continue! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! It'd be a complete shame to leave such an awesome fic unfinished!
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Reviewed By: oreade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 15:39 CDT
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looking forward to it!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 20:13 CDT
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wouldnt mind a sequil...
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