| "Duelin' Emotions" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Jaisa Rael [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 02:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How about Hiei/Kagome/Sesshoumaru
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Reviewed By: Jaisa Rael [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2008 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome/hiei/yoko kurama Sesshomaru/Sango Koenma/boton Yukina/Yusuke Kuwabara/Kyko Shizo/Miroko InuYasha/Kyiko (inu's first love)
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Title: here you go
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 06:28 CST
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Hiei/Kagome*HELL NO* Hiei/Kagome/Kurama*love, maybe* Kurama/Kagome*LOvE* Youko(While in the past)/Kagome*LOvE* Youko/Kagome/Kuronue*LOvE* Kuronue/Kagome*love, but no* Yuusuke/Kagome*gross* Yuusuke/Kayko*yes* Hiei/Sango*love* Miroku/Sango*maybe* Kurama/Sango*gross* Sesshomaru/Sango*no* Sesshomaru/Kayko*no* Miroku/Kayko*no* Miroku/Botan*no* Kuwabara/Noone*no* Kuwabara/Yukina*yes* Inuyasha/Kayko*no* Inuyasha/Botan*yes* Kurama/Botan*HELL NO! gross* Hiei/Botan*HELL NO! gross*
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 06:25 CST
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Hiei/Kagome*HELL NO* Hiei/Kagome/Kurama*love, maybe* Kurama/Kagome*LOvE* Youko(While in the past)/Kagome*LOvE* Youko/Kagome/Kuronue*LOvE* Kuronue/Kagome*love, but no* Yuusuke/Kagome*gross* Hiei/Sango*love* Miroku/Sango*maybe* Kurama/Sango*gross* Sesshomaru/Sango*no* Sesshomaru/Kayko*no* Miroku/Kayko*no* Miroku/Botan*no* Kuwabara/Noone*no* Kuwabara/Yukina*yes* Inuyasha/Kayko*no* Inuyasha/Botan*yes* Kurama/Botan*gross*
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 06:19 CST
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Hiei/Kagome*HELL NO* Hiei/Kagome/Kurama*love, maybe* Kurama/Kagome*LOvE* Youko(While in the past)/Kagome*LOvE* Youko/Kagome/Kuronue*LOvE* Kuronue/Kagome*love, but no* Yuusuke/Kagome*gross* Hiei/Sango*love* Miroku/Sango*maybe* Kurama/Sango*gross* Sesshomaru/Sango*no* Sesshomaru/Kayko*no* Miroku/Kayko*no* Miroku/Botan*no* Kuwabara/Noone*no* Kuwabara/Yukina*yes* Inuyasha/Kayko*no* Inuyasha/Botan*yes* Kurama/Botan*gross*
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Reviewed By: LadyAmamizu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your stories really good... any wy i think the pairing should be Yoko and Kagome... i hope you get over your writers block soon.
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story!! please update ASAP!!! its should be hiei/kagome/Youko!!! and make the story longer please ^_^
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Title: vote
Reviewed By: ShihanKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 18:45 CDT
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i vote for............Youko/Kagome and this is good
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Reviewed By: theforgetfulYume On: July 21, 2005 22:28 CDT
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I think its pretty good. I vote for a Hiei/Kagome pairing cuz they're just so cute or a Hiei/Kagome/Kurama pairing cuz there just aren't enough. I love both of the guys so I'd read either way. One thing I'd like to suggest is that you don't change POVs so much. It does get pretty annoying. Can't wait till you update. Ja!
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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on you have to upDATE AND SOON THIS SOUND HILIARIOUS i KNOW i CAN'T SPELL BUT PLEASE UPDATE. *s*
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Reviewed By: SQUEEKER On: July 17, 2005 15:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh this is going to be good. i can tell. u should up date soon. pls pls pretty pls with sugar and a cherry on top.
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Title: Idea Time
Reviewed By: Foxfire_14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 04:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hey the begging is good i do not think you should change it , its good as it is , im writing a story now but its my first , but im waiting until its done cause i dont wanna be in the middle of the 50 th chapter and get writers block , anyways i think it should be a youko and kagome pairing because the more i read crossovers i realize you cant have a good hiei and kagome story with out hiei out of character or the story is werid , anyway i vote youko and kagome pairing and i have some ideas for titles , i mean whatever goes with the story :) 1 knife called lust 2. Dueling emotions 3. back to nature 4. Life changing moments 5. Heavens not enough 6. gangstas dont know how to act ( lol srry ) 7. back from the future i dont know i was just thinking while listening to some music but maybe you can find an idea out of these ghetto titles lol good luck - shyanne - foxfire_14
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Great Story Keep up the good work I think that your story is perfect, just make the chapters a bit longer and please don't make us wait rerally long for the next chapter.Love it. Bye...WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Pretty good
Reviewed By: Kagster On: July 16, 2005 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty Good but it still needs some work in some areas. U could put an explanation of the japanese words in there for the people that doesn't no what they mean
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