| "If I Close My Eyes Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2001 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is so messed up! I can't believe Trunks did that to Pan. I have to agree with Susan on this one and say that you have to write a sequel. On a side note though I want you to know that I am so mad at you!! I had this really great fic for Vegeta and Bulma lined up that had basically this same idea. Oh well I guess that just means that great minds think alike. Anywho, see you next fic. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 28, 2001 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw man, that's so sad. Please write a sequel where they get back together. They love each other and it would be a shame to let it end like this. Peace |
