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| "Only One Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Natsuru On: July 22, 2006 23:01 CDT
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Such sadness in this story. Once read I feel some form of aching sorrow, but I'm glad that they'll be together, whether in life or death, never parted for long.
| Title: *Cries*
Reviewed By: Sandileina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 12:05 CDT
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Omigosh, this fic was so bittersweet. I loved how you hinted at the end that Heero committed suicide. Or is that just my brain jumping to conclusions again...? I don't know. But I really liked this fic. It was so bittersweet, as I've said. Good luck in the competition! ~Sandy~
| Reviewed By: Sakiku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Lol, I just posted my own entry when I saw yours, and I couldn't resist getting a look at my competition. I have to say, that's a very well-written story, Heero's mourning of Duo's death a heart-breaking scene. I like it very much, especially Duo's wish upon the shooting star - and Heero's adaption of it at the end of the story. And generally, the theme of making a wish that goes from Heero's refusal to make one at the beginning to his tired capitulation in the end is a really great one. Your writing style magnificently captures Heero's feelings, leaving a very sad aftertaste long after the story's over. It was very moving, and I thank you for that. For the contest, I wish you best luck, you've got an excellent story with high chances of winning. Sakiku
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