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| "Show Me Love" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: M-X [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 13:38 CDT
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I think you expressed very well what Sango feels. I mean, we are able to see it graphically in the anime, but the words yo put to the image are great and it shows how well you know the characters. In this one-shot, she shows more maturity, making her mind about what to expect from the relationship, if there is any, and what to do about it. Also, Miroku acted like I have always wished him to! The others were perfectly IC and I enjoyed the fic very much.
| Reviewed By: Inuyasha's Mate On: September 12, 2005 20:36 CDT
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Sorry peoples. My computer started acting weird, then it gave you all 3 copies of my review. Oh well. . .It just shows I like Mujitsu's work 3x as much! Sorry again.
| Reviewed By: Inuyasha's Mate On: September 12, 2005 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very touching. . .sniff. . .sniff. That was the greatest love story I've ever read! This was awesome, the way that Miroku was willing to give up his life for her. . . Miroku really does love her. I would give this story a rating of infinity, but it only goes up to 10. Inuyasha: Feh! You say that about all of her stories. Me: I think he trying to say he likes it. Inuyasha: I didn't say that. . . Me: Admit it Inuyasha. . . You love me to read her stories to you!! Inuyasha: Whatever. Me: Inuyasha if you don't give Mujitsu a good review I will not read to you her other fanfic "For Richer or Poorer" and on top of that *flames shooting up behind me* I will S-I-T you so many times, you will want to hunt her down and tell her personally how much you like her work! Inuyasha: Okay. . .Listen up everyone!!If you humans don't start giving Mujitsu a good review, I will hunt you all down, and force you all to review! Me: Good job! Inuyasha: Now can you read me "For Richer or Poorer"!?! Me: Yes. Inuyasha: Yay!!*jumping up and down* Me: Alright you people, you heard Inuyasha, start making reviews. When your done, don't forget to read all of Mujitsu's other fanfics. Never stop writing Mujitsu!!
| Reviewed By: Inuyasha's Mate On: September 12, 2005 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very touching. . .sniff. . .sniff. That was the greatest love story I've ever read! This was awesome, the way that Miroku was willing to give up his life for her. . . Miroku really does love her. I would give this story a rating of infinity, but it only goes up to 10. Inuyasha: Feh! You say that about all of her stories. Me: I think he trying to say he likes it. Inuyasha: I didn't say that. . . Me: Admit it Inuyasha. . . You love me to read her stories to you!! Inuyasha: Whatever. Me: Inuyasha if you don't give Mujitsu a good review I will not read to you her other fanfic "For Richer or Poorer" and on top of that *flames shooting up behind me* I will S-I-T you so many times, you will want to hunt her down and tell her personally how much you like her work! Inuyasha: Okay. . .Listen up everyone!!If you humans don't start giving Mujitsu a good review, I will hunt you all down, and force you all to review! Me: Good job! Inuyasha: Now can you read me "For Richer or Poorer"!?! Me: Yes. Inuyasha: Yay!!*jumping up and down* Me: Alright you people, you heard Inuyasha, start making reviews. When your done, don't forget to read all of Mujitsu's other fanfics. Never stop writing Mujitsu!!
| Reviewed By: Inuyasha's Mate On: September 12, 2005 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very touching. . .sniff. . .sniff. That was the greatest love story I've ever read! This was awesome, the way that Miroku was willing to give up his life for her. . . Miroku really does love her. I would give this story a rating of infinity, but it only goes up to 10. Inuyasha: Feh! You say that about all of her stories. Me: I think he trying to say he likes it. Inuyasha: I didn't say that. . . Me: Admit it Inuyasha. . . You love me to read her stories to you!! Inuyasha: Whatever. Me: Inuyasha if you don't give Mujitsu a good review I will not read to you her other fanfic "For Richer or Poorer" and on top of that *flames shooting up behind me* I will S-I-T you so many times, you will want to hunt her down and tell her personally how much you like her work! Inuyasha: Okay. . .Listen up everyone!!If you humans don't start giving Mujitsu a good review, I will hunt you all down, and force you all to review! Me: Good job! Inuyasha: Now can you read me "For Richer or Poorer"!?! Me: Yes. Inuyasha: Yay!!*jumping up and down* Me: Alright you people, you heard Inuyasha, start making reviews. When your done, don't forget to read all of Mujitsu's other fanfics. Never stop writing Mujitsu!!
| Reviewed By: N2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 11:23 CDT
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This is great! I notice in your section that you really like to use love in a lot of your fics.
| Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 17:10 CDT
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again so lovely! ^_^ perfect time for inuyasha to show up, ne? XD
| Reviewed By: Inu Fan05 On: July 18, 2005 17:31 CDT
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loved it! i think this one is the best out of the three. great job and i hope your arm gets better.
| Reviewed By: Aila On: July 18, 2005 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah... these fics are really good... This one is really the best, and i'm glad you did it. it's about time someone wrote something like this. ^_^
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