| "From Method To Madness" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Tyler548 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it the pairings were really cool. wow I wish there was more but hey we can't have what we want all the time...damnit. anyway Great job!
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Reviewed By: jj On: July 20, 2005 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story but i noticed some minor mistakes. first of all you put that BB and speedy used their hands to ejaculate themselves while their partners penetrated them but ejaculating themselves doesnt make any sense, i think what you ment to say was that they were pleasuring themselves. also you spelled semen as seamen which is wrong. but other than that it was an excellent story that i enjoyed reading. keep up the good work.
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