| "Kyouki no Kyanpasu" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: Whoa
Reviewed By: Kaoriel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 06:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh. This is an awesome story. I can't believe that there's only 14 reviews on it!! You have great ideas, and I loved every minute of reading it (even though a lot of the chapters take me almost an hour to read XD) Please continue writing, this is _incredible_.
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Title: Long time no read
Reviewed By: iconoclast [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 10:13 CDT
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Whee, I can't believe it's been more than a year since I've last read this! A year, and *three more chapters!* I wish you'd write more and more often, but that's just the selfish ungrateful reader in me. Actually, let me be a little grateful: Thank you for the wonderful story. I can't believe that some of the ideas you have here originate from 1998! (That is EIGHT YEARS AGO!) Man, how can you NOT write something for eight years?! Please update soon, and I will be your servant!
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Reviewed By: Starfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 22:46 CDT
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Captured my attention and didn't let go =) eagerly awaiting more
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Title: Since the Begining
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 12:08 CST
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Dang that was good. You know if anyone were to ever publish something it would definately be you. You don't write a story, you tell a tale. When I read its like being read to by a narriator. It's the kind of writing that captures me (the reader) and takes me to places I've never been. You make me want to write; more imortantly you make me want to read, and be a part of the story. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: anonymous1979 On: June 19, 2005 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont read original stories but this one is exception. Superb! Needs more updates though:)
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Reviewed By: iconoclast [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One flaw: you need to update more often. Other than that, absolutely perfect...
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Title: martial arts...
Reviewed By: Wong Fei-Hung On: December 10, 2004 11:10 CST
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You've captured the feeling of a martial art fight exactly. I know... I take one myself... I love the story! Tang Soo! (if ya don't know what that means, go onto a tang soo do forum.)
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko On: December 30, 2003 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya need t' work on yer spelling/grammar.
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Reviewed By: Rena Valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2002 01:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whew... Finally got to this chapter, late as usual, I spose.
Sounding great. You already know I liked the first half, and the fight scene was interesting to say the least. ^_^ Melikes. It'll be interesting to see where you take this. ^^
Evil kitty, eh? No evil Kitties 'round here! Can't wait to see where you're taking THAT. |
Reviewed By: AKBS On: May 07, 2002 21:52 CDT
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So I FORGOT! SUE ME!!
I like it, though some of your writing is a little halting in some places (Most notably in Chapter 1.) But you had me cracking up during the first two chapters.
I really like Ashley and Rueben (Though I'm a little fonder of Ruebun at this point...) They are both awesome characters. I also like your supporting characters and how you've described the college itself.
The only thing I have to say is that it's how many years into the future, and colleges still can't cook a decent plate of food??? |
Reviewed By: Dilandaus_girl,Tayles,Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2002 02:59 CDT
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Now I will have bad dreams of plushie kitties, gee thanx. I can't believe you got this done. I had to wait long enough. Thanx for the great read. **write more, write more** I would write a better review, but I already told you it all. |
Reviewed By: Rena Valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2002 03:42 CST
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Toldja I would read it, and lo and behold, I did! ^_^
/paranoia = on/
Damn you for getting me addicted to this! I'll bet this is part of your evil plotting for world domination... Well I won't have it, bucko! I'm on to you...
/paranoia = off/
In other words, love the characters, love the story, love the interesting references, and the originality. More in the next few months... pweease? ::Insert cutesy eyed smile::
Writer of the greatest and most informative reviews, Rena. |
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2002 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The reason for a 9 on originality is the curse, you did say it was taken from another anime. I don't know anything about the anime's you refered to, so to me this fiction is orginal. I know there is more. I like the idea of many smaller stories making up the series. Let me know when there is more to read.
As you can see, I can't review very well, I don't have the experience to go into depth about others writing, I just know what I enjoy reading, and I enjoyed this story.
Fanilia |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2002 21:15 CST
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Hey, I liked this. I don't know anything about Ranma, but it was amusing anyway. I know you prefer contructive reviews and the like, but I'm not in the frame of mind at the moment. *Assumes teenybopper voice* I liked it 'cause it was so, like cool and stuff! *Shudders at her own freakishness* *~Princess~* |
Reviewed By: Rena Valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2002 23:55 CST
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See! I TOLD you I would read this and I did. So hah!
I figured I would write you a review since
1)It took quite a while to read. ^_~
2) You're not on the forum right now, whilst people plot against you. *grins*
3)People LIKE getting reviews!
4)I liked this.
Yup, I'm never good at reviews.
I really enjoy the style you use, even if this was written a long time ago, as you said... somewhere. It's light and humourous, descriptive, and just plain amusing. Makes me wish I actually knew the fandoms you write for.
Are you planning on doing anything with this story ever again? T'was very believeable as an anime and really fun. Melikes. ^_^ |
