| "Dazed and Confused" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Crooked Star [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2010 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an awesome story. I loved how you portrayed Sousuke's character and the whole time he spend questioning his condition was hilarious. I would have loved to have seen if they ended up at the dance together (which I assume they would have) and read about what he thought of the dance as well. Overall, it was hilarious up until the last sentence.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 00:08 CST
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very, very cute!! so well done! i just wish there was more. i laughed, rather loudly, at him eating the evidence (wasn't there a conversation about that already?). i hate to see this end, but seeing that it's been nearly a year and a half...that's sad. great job, i dont' think i can say that enough. it's rare to find anything on FMP, let alone something well written!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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my god. i really wanted to make it to the end without reviewing and just leave one helluva long review, but i CAN'T make it that long. this is AWESOME!!!!!! my god, you've had me hooked since the first few lines. the dictionary solidified it. OOC? not a chance in hell. this is so well written it's ridicilous! you're right on key with every character and i've nearly fallen off my chair twice from laughter. everything fits together so wonderfully and the humor you employee fits Sousuke to a T. your creation of his character is nearly identicle (given a year or two for him to grow from where he is now). but, my gawd, this is so well done. you better believe i'm passing the link for the story up to a group of friends. this is just awesome!!! only one thing i noticed that had me chuckling, as far as grammatical mistakes. return in time to trail Kagome home i believe it was chapter 4, right before the end of the chapter. not Kagome...i've nearly done the same thing though (being a writer of inu-fanfic). but all together, this is so well done, i can't stop gushing over it!!!! you hit Sousuke right on the head (and god knows i love this man!). LOL. a standing ovation, seriously.
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Reviewed By: Silent Tears of Agony [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have liked to been able to read a few more chapters, so this story could come to a more complete ending. However, the ending of the last chapter does seem to sort of close it. At least they were coming to an understanding. I've been searching for decent FMP fics for a while, and yours is one of only a handful I was able to find. (Seemingly OOC Sosuke and all!) ^^ Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Reviewed By: Kiana-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm new to FMP fics, but I think you really did well at capturing the characters. I don't know if you've seen fumoffu or second raid, so while they may seem OOC to the fans of the original, I think you've managed to reflect their personalities to a 'T.' I started reading this last night at like, 1am and couldn't go to sleep until I'd finished! I wish you'd keep writing--I loved the 'tear gas' line in chapter 4~! Well, I'll let you get to your work then...
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Reviewed By: relenabarton [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. It made me laugh so much, this is very funny and dramatic. I really like the way you write Souske's POV it's excellent. Please continue writing I really want to see the ending. Update soon!!
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Title: Dazed and Confused
Reviewed By: Bookreader9999 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 12:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is great!! I can't wait for your next update!!! Keep up the good work!!!
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Title: CrazyDragon
Reviewed By: CrazyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I *like* this one! Character-driven...my favorite kind! Looks like you've really gotten into what our favorite Sgt. might be thinking. =} I can't say it's super-original--but it doesn't have to be, to be super-good! *And* you have good grammer and spelling...::grabbing a pair of buckets to catch the waterfall of thankful tears, ala Soun Tendo (Ranma 1/2):: I DETEST finding a story that would be good...*if* you can wade through the author's allergy to self-editing with a *critical* eye before posting. Sheesh! Please, keep writing! We need more! =D
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Title: ch1-3
Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 22:22 CDT
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when u write, it really feels like u have gotten into sousuke's head, kudos to u!
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