| "Life Isn't Worth Living Without You" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: sophs On: June 09, 2003 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic i can't wait till the next chapters |
Reviewed By: Lady_Saiyan On: June 07, 2003 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
\\\\Keep it up//// |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 08, 2003 04:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, so Bulma was raped too and Veggie's got a guilt trip about it. I'm glad he told Trunks, now he'll really be there for Pan. Good chap ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Akane of the Underdark [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, continue soon, its a REALLY good story.... -come to think of it, u ALWAYS write good stories +hand behind head, goku-style+ so anyways, continue soon, and add sum more suspense, ***cough: Trunks kills that SOB stalker/etc. cough***** |
Reviewed By: lola4eva On: January 13, 2003 03:26 CST
Comment/Review:
cool! please update! make the next chapter a lemon. |
Reviewed By: Cherry On: July 24, 2002 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Are you gonna finish it? |
Reviewed By: Yurika On: July 13, 2002 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a very nice fanfict, you should really continue if you don't I am sure a lot people will be on your tail until you do. So please update soon, we are waiting for the next chapter come out! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 18, 2002 00:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whew! I'm glad it's all out in the open. After all that Pan's been through Trunks is going to have to be patient with her. At least he knows now that she loves him ^_^. Good chapter. |
Reviewed By: Alli-Kat On: June 02, 2002 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!! I can't wait till you update (please hurry)! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 30, 2002 04:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think things will start to improve from here. Pan knows she's not the only one to have gone thru that hell and she has Bulma's support. Maybe now Pan will be able to talk to Trunks and put the past behind her. Good job. |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2002 15:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was crying. This was great, can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Panny-Chan On: May 21, 2002 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your fic is really good but doesn't anybody understand that Gohan is not related to Pan in this at all?! I read the other reviews and they think Gohan is behind this. I don't think Gohan would do that unless he was OOC. Anyway I love the fic but don't leave us on a cliffhanger like that! I hate cliffhangers! Please update it soon! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 14, 2002 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that didn't go very well, now did it? I just hope they come to an understanding soon, although that gonna be hard to do when both are so pigheaded. Update soon ok? |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: May 13, 2002 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you going to finish this story it's so good and your just going to leave me hanging. No WAy your going to write more ok because I REALLY REALLY wan to read the rest. ;)> |
Reviewed By: Dark_Angel On: May 08, 2002 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should make another chaper. man i wanna c what happenes and im boded of waiting for another chapter. can u make the next chapter like quick. quick like speedy gonzolis. i dont know how to spell it dont get mad at me. anyways im to hyper to spell right. |
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