| "Life Isn't Worth Living Without You" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: butterfly, On: February 03, 2002 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey :D this story is cool, i can't wait till the next one is up :D |
Reviewed By: Hotohori4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2002 16:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello, I'm enjoying this fic alot, but also I was wondering could you update Was It Faith? I'm really getting into it.
Your#1 otaku,
Hotohori4ever (or hotohori4life, doesnt matter)
p.s.
I would love if you wrote a FY (Fushigi Yugi)fan fic. I definitely think Tasuki-chan would seem familiar!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 31, 2002 02:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I feel so bad for Pan, and that bastard should be hung by his balls. At least the whole sordid thing is out in the open, and now with Trunks and Vegeta's help she can get on with her life. Great chapter. Peace |
Reviewed By: Kotoro/ The Guardian On: February 01, 2002 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry with the other chapters, I'm very anxious to see what happens ^-^; it may sound pathectic, but I really don't care. |
Reviewed By: wow On: February 01, 2002 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this is a such good fic! please write the next one soon!! can't wait to see what happens next. well hurry up! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: yea! On: January 28, 2002 12:17 CST
Comment/Review:
yea i agree wit mizu megami!! Kill him!! |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2002 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is too good plz plz plz let trunks kill that ass hole/basterd pan has for a good for nothing father. i hate t/p fics but i realy like this one. |
Reviewed By: more!!!!!!! On: January 23, 2002 16:30 CST
Comment/Review:
please write more!!!!!!!!!!can't wait such a good fic!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 22, 2002 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel so sorry for Trunks. I think Pan is way too rude and harsh, but then again I think her past has alot to do with it. Hope they get together soon. Write more. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 14, 2002 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Tension's building up and it's freaking Pan out. Please have Trunks kill the bastard stalker. Can't wait to read the rest. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 08, 2002 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is some fic. I'm enjoying it but I do feel that Pan has to chill out a little. I'm sure that the horrible abuse she suffered as a child has alot to do with the aggression she shows to others. I find myself fearing for her safety because "he" might be in town. Anyway, I can't wait to read the next chappie. Good job. Peace |
Reviewed By: Marron On: January 08, 2002 12:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's cool that your doing a story about pan. she is like a sis to me, well i love the story!!!!! hey come up with more chapters. there going to be great, just like the others!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 29, 2001 04:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! I hate child abuse-makes me sick to my stomach. Is this poor girl Pan, and is her SOB father Gohan? It's hard to picture Gohan as a filthy bastard, but anything's possible in fan fiction. Anyway, I can't wait to see where you take this. Peace |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 03, 2002 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the talk between Pan and Trunks, and Bulma and Trunks. So now that things seem to have been made clear to him maybe Pan will develop feelings for him. Good chapter. Peace |
Reviewed By: Kotoro/ The Guardian On: February 01, 2002 23:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Ya know, even tought I've read it already I'm gonna read it again. Please let Trunks kill the son of a bitch stalker!!! That be so cool! ::cheer leading squad in the background 'Go trunks! Go trunks':: God, shut the f**k up already!! I apologize, they really like Trunks..... |
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