| "Life Isn't Worth Living Without You" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: May 06, 2002 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Veggie's right. Pan should be telling Trunks that she loves him instead of letting him think the opposite. Update soon pls. |
Reviewed By: maria On: April 03, 2002 22:24 CST
Comment/Review:
please please it's a really really good story and i can't wait for more ...... finish soon |
Reviewed By: Bulma On: March 23, 2002 08:03 CST
Comment/Review:
hey i love ur story, but i reallllly hate child abuse. but ne wayz, can u put a little B/V in it? |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Who is Pan's abusive Father? I hope it isn't Gohan. Even if it is,... I really don't know. This is a great fanfic. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2002 17:11 CST
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oops not go good*
once again,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2002 17:10 CST
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DAMN IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW DARE YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *counts to 100 and breathes deaply* ok now get it right. put up more...ok now a little more...go geting the hang of it?
hehe gomen nasi,
:)mizu :P
P.S. *sweatdrops* ok im fine i dont need to go to the crazy house...i...just...need to...read...MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: silly girl On: March 08, 2002 09:41 CST
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This is great! This is a total new idea and it's good written to.
I love Pan in this story because she is like Vegeta! (OOOoooohhhh...vegeta...)
anyway, keep going and hurry up with the next chap! |
Reviewed By: dare [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2002 02:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man u r the best....got the best story...and keepin it funny throughout.....ur good at this!!!!
keep goin man!!! |
Reviewed By: Dragon_Optic [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2002 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is a great story its so different and i can wait to find out what happens next please hurry and get the next chapters up plz |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 03, 2002 04:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NNNNNOOOOOOOOOO, that bastard has to pay for what he has done! I hope Pan isn't seriously injured and I hope Veggie finds her. Maybe then the truth will come out and Trunks will come to understand why Pan is the way she is. Great story. |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2002 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I love this story You gotta write more |
Reviewed By: Moosie On: February 23, 2002 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love T/P fanficcies and this is by far one of the best ones I have read. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Kudos to Pan for telling Trunks to stop being such a pig! |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2002 05:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good good now put up more...yes good Veggie Trunks
good. ok im done hehe.
put up more ASAP,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 21, 2002 03:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chap. Poor Pan is in such conflict right now about her feelings for Trunks, and Trunks needs to take a very cold shower. Can't wait to read ur next update. Peace |
Reviewed By: Akane On: February 20, 2002 03:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is really good and different from all of the T/P's I've read. Mostly A/U w/Vegitasei has to do w/Pn being a slave and Trunks the usual.So this is why I like this fic. |
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