| "What Happens When a Demon and a Mermaid Mix!!" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 21:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
i liked this story. as far as i can see there are only a few problems (which is better than the stuff i write). it kinda felt a bit rushed and it was a little hard to read with the grammar & stuff (im not complaining so much as informing, i hate grammar & spelling as much as the next sane person). still overall it was very good. i think a sequel would be a very good idea.
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Reviewed By: baka_mai_28 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 01:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
AHHHH!!!!! UPDATE!!!!! PLEASE DO REALLY REALLY SOON!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY!!
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Reviewed By: Kira562 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you
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