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| "Oath Breaker" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 21:56 CST
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*Gasp!* An update? Wow. And the relationship between Harry and Draco.... is great! I can not wait to read the lemon... if there will be one... You are amazing! *gushes!* and the spelling and grammar is out of this world. You are a god amoung writers!
| Reviewed By: megtheteler [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was awesome but I want more chappies! I want yaoi out the wazoo! And I want Harry to get a little something to bite him in the butt for what he did.
| Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(Not Logged In) On: November 30, 2006 21:46 CST
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Yes! More chapters! Damn i didn't think that Harry could get that violent. But obviously he can. I love your take on Dark Magic. I think I have said it before, but it is seriously fucking awsome. I am sitting here reading this and I pick out all these little intricate things that you put in. Like the code of honor and the no sex before marrage thing. I can't get enough of this story. But you don't update quickly...-sniffle- Nothing against you, but it makes the urge to read almost unbareable. So is Harry and Draco going to get married so they have hott sex? I am being kicked off, or else I would have more to say about your story. Tis awsomeness! Ja!
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 20:54 CST
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Damn, moths without an update, and three chapters in a row, all excellent. The dark is there, and not so evil, and th elight isn't entirely good either. Not to mention, this was a great way to handle the effects of the amulet (true, false, neither? its all confusing and unproven, though one thing is perhaps true, for true love, maybe it really does create the connection for the something there to be found). Either way, sigh. I liked the quiditch game coverage, no one gets it quite right like the books, but handling it this way was best. Still, a week off for Draco would be best, exhausted as he is, sleep and relaxation is what's needed most, especially after everything that's happened. Of course, Ron will always be THE GIT, and Hermoine might be accepting (probably will be aftera bit, though she'll have to work through it all). Anyway, more to do, and to get to my own writing, I must go. Still, keep up the good work. And even an update this infreqent, with this many chapters, is much appreciated (REALLY REALLY REALL appreciated!) Good luck. Oh, and I like the Snape story too, its simple, but cool as well.
| Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 10:29 CST
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*gasp* 3 updates in one? sweet! oh how I love this fic... without a doubt one of the best Harry/Draco fic's... I may not like crying, weak, pathetic Draco... you write it soo well and make it soo believable... (then again he is a Malfoy) anyways hope to read more soon. -Tjay
| Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 19:18 CST
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Oh... why haven't you updated? I love this soo much... well I've waiting this long... I suppose I can wait a little longer... but I just love how their relationship is growing and that they haven't just jumpped in the sack with each other like two horny sluts...
| Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 20:30 CDT
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Love it !!!!!!! Harry and Draco I really couldn't ask for more. I really hope you continue to write this story because I love it sooooooooo much!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 21:41 CDT
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I would really like it if Harry and Draco were shagging. I mean, it would make things oh so interesting. Lol. But then it would probobly cause more problems. This is very intricate and well written. I have remembered little tidbits of casual conversation and had it come back around and find out something important. You're crafty in your wording and you make things compleately plausable if you disregard what this story overrides. You have not explained those scars on Harry yet, and I am looking forward to that. Though it is safe to assume that it was the Dursleys, maybe Voldemort or his followers. I doubt they would have had an attack recent enough for his scars to be 'pink' and 'fresh looking.' Sometimes, when I am trying to remember a single book, I get confused with the other ones. I am going to go consult my own copies to justify Harry's personality in your story. He seems laid back more, not as angry and a little more thourough in his contemplation of thnigs. I don't think he was quite like that during THBP. This is an amazing read though, and I love the way you put it in Draco's point of view. The way you write allows you to do this accurately. Trust me, I have seen some writers who try to do a Malfoy's point of view, and they totaly bomb at it. Lol. I am glad I could find someone who was adiquate at it. But like I said before, your writing style almost makes you seem like you would be a Malfoy, or atleast a Slytherin. Very impressive. The Half Wyvern thing was an interesting twist; and the way you explained it, I could almost see it happening. It was an interesting concept to grasp, and it makes me think that you put a lot of thought into this story as you were writing it, or planning it. Those vicious plot bunnies can be so persistint. Those steemy scenes in the shower made me want more, and I can only imagine how you are going to write them coupling. It's going to be...passionate to say the least. The way you wrote Harry, you made him throw his whole self into what he was doing. Atleast, that was how I saw some of his actions. I could be the only one, also, who thinks that even if Draco did distroy the charm, the hair and honey mixture, that Harry would not feel any different than he does now. There were small implications that Harry did harbor some small, maybe barely noticeable feelings for Draco before he even made it. I am sorry, but when Draco was that small little serpent with wings, and Harry said he was 'gorgeous,' I had to think that something was going to happen between them. It just seemed like a too strong of a word to be led to anything less. Wow, I wrote alot. Lol. But this is awsome. I am excited for another chapter. When I see that there is another chapter from this particular story, I will jump for joy. Lol. Not many storys can do that. This just happens to be one of them. Keep it up! You are the only one who can slake my thirst for this story. -snickers- Ja!
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 14:03 CDT
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Core to the books, interesting take on the events of the 6th book, and thorough research into english, latin and other languages, its a neat read. Not to mention te first INTELLIGENT design to dark magic that I've seen. Please continue to write about this story, and even provide some source info as well? Probably the best Harry/Draco story I've read (and very true to Draco's character, his cowardice and angst a sign of needing a shield against the world. I see nothing wrong, though I would consider this story more of a divergence after book 5 than a true AU story. Not to mention (at least for future chapters) perhaps even a romance (though that seems unlikely). Anyway, keep updating, this one rocks!!!
| Reviewed By: Hideto-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 22:06 CDT
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Awesome!!! I really enjoyed reading this!! I started yesterday and have been hooked ever since. Please update soon!!
| Reviewed By: Tjay Motou(nli) On: July 26, 2006 13:28 CDT
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Oh dang... I got my hopes up for nothing... but you did manage to fix the chapter one/eleven problem...
| Reviewed By: dragon_of.the_moon On: July 22, 2006 12:53 CDT
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you do realize that chapter 1 and 11 are the same chapter right?
| Reviewed By: blah11 On: April 08, 2006 20:44 CDT
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I luv tis fic.. update soon plz?
| Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 10:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic... and I like how you made Draco's character... it was nice... good job... you should like... write a novel or something... anyways thumbs up... and I'll be waiting for an update.
| Reviewed By: kady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 03:03 CST
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great story ^-^ I can't wait to hear more
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