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| "Oath Breaker" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: Creative Pornography [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 18:04 CDT
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Hey! I have one fanfic art up, many other to come. :3 (Hope you enjoy!)
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 00:31 CDT
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It's great to see an update, especially one that's been in th wings ever since you wrote the proposal in the last chapter. Lately it seems a lot of HP fanfiction includes weddings, and this one, while stiff and awkward, captures the mood of the events perfectly (awkward and stiff and not terribly romantic, but very binding). Neh, it's good to see an update. Please continue to do so soon.
| Reviewed By: MajaLi (not logged in) On: October 21, 2007 23:06 CDT
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Wahey! Thank you for finally updating! *runs off to read*
| Reviewed By: Creative Pornography [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A winning conclusion for an amazing story, albeit, it's a bit cliché with the typical happily ever ending to seal the fate of Draco and Harry's relationship, nonetheless, this story was well thought up, original, and spell binding throughout. The way you display these characters (Harry, Draco, and even Hermione) and exploit them to the many case scenarios without falling under the category of O.O.C, is just amazing! Not only that, you still had room to add on to the characters (Draco). I think this is one of the few times I've ever been so blown out of my mind with a fanfiction, Congratulations. If anything, and if it's okay with you, I would like to dedicate a few fanart based on your story and to the few scenes that stood out to me so vividly. (Any special request included if you like.) But I would be very thankful if I could do just that on behalf of your fanfiction. My deviantart account is: http://lickmyrainbow.deviantart.com/ If you do allow me the privilage that's about the only website I would display my work so you can check it out once I'm done. It was a joy having to read your fanfiction, thank you for sharing your wonderful gift. :D
| Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 08:00 CDT
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Loved the chapter... I was just so beautiful the dark weeding.. I just did not like the fact of how both sides acted towards each other. Wonder if Harry and Lucius will ever get along..... update again soon
| Reviewed By: catherine! On: September 08, 2007 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this.. its so cute that end bit!! 10/10!! update soon!!
| Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do enjoy reading your stories. This is a beautiful piece of work. You've done an excellent job and I can tell you took you time with your plot. (A round of applause). The detail of the potion, dragon anatomy and battles are very well thought out. Reading some of the reviews, I must that TheAlchemist has a couple of good points. Though I'm not convinced that Lily would be a dark wizard, especially if she's muggle-born. Though she was probably a lot like Hermione and she stumbled on the protective spell that just happened to be labeled as dark and she used it as a last resort. (But that's just my argument.) I agree about Sirius, but he probably is in denial. Please keep up the good work, you're doing wonderfully. I hope you finished this story and get back to 'beneath a shattered fountain.' ^_^
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 14:38 CDT
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AWESOME UPDATE!!! Heh, the story goes from star crossed to a real chance. Pretty sweet. Anyway, thanks for continuing this story, to me it's one of the best Harry Potter stories out there. Please update again soon (without a 3 month lapse in your writing again, thank you very much). Alright, that's about it, later.
| Reviewed By: amber va On: July 29, 2007 15:43 CDT
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Wonderful story. I just found it the other day and have spent most of my time since then reading it. I love your dark wizards and how made them and their magic...I'm not explaining what I mean very well. Really great story.
| Title: Review Ch 26
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! The boys are back together! Wahoo! Also, politics and a peace process! Yay! ... Thanks for writing, Kin Pandun
| Reviewed By: Katinhiding On: July 27, 2007 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had me hanging off of your every word. I had to stop several times since it's so long (not that that is in any way a bad thing...long stories are by far the best)and each time I awaited anxiously for the next time I could get on the net long enough to read. I just HAD to know what was going to happen next! Your Character and plot development is very well thought out and conveied. I would give much to be able to write as well as you do. Your knack for getting into the characters themselves is wonderful, and as such, it alows the reader to be right there with you, feelign the drama, the pain, the happieness, exc as if it were their own! (or at least that's what it felt like to me. Maybe I'm just easily excitable)I'm so glad that you updated today. I was worried when I hit chapter 25. I thought I had come to the end until you updated again. Then I saw that one more chapter had been added and I nearly wept for joy! (ok, so maybe that's a little overdramatic, but it was close) That being said, I'm afraid I'm going to have to beg you to update this soon. I'll probably be checking at least three times a day for the next chapter, and I htink it will prbably drive me insane if you take to long :( You wouldn't want that to happen to poor little old me, now would you? I liked your employment of old English and such. All of your explinations and such made perfect sense and it all tied together neatly. I'm so glad that I found this fic! It's very unique! The best I've ever read for Harry Potter! You have my unyeilding admiration! Please keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 00:07 CDT
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Yay Harry and Draco are getting married!!!!! Cannot wait until the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(nli) On: July 26, 2007 19:11 CDT
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Kissing! Whoot whoot! You have no idea how aganizing this was reading it where there was no sex and almost no kissing! It was all like....-sobs from sexual frustration- And now! They are betrothed! Again! Umm.... How did that escape Lucius' notice that his son was betrothed to Harry Bloody Potter? Wait, it might because he was gone almost the whole story. -sighs- Okay okay...Soo...um... How did it escape Snape's notice? Or did it? Is that why Severus and Lucius were arguing at the table? You wrote it like Albus knew that they were together....Mhmm....Very curious. I am eager for the next chapter?! Is it going to be the last chapter? I dare say it isn't! I mean, you have so much more to write! About how the Light wizards react to the dark wizards and how people take Harry's marriage to Draco! I mean....was there anyone besides the Slytherins that knew Draco and Harry were together? mhmm....I think I am going to have to go back and read this whole story again. Ja! Ps, is Draco gunna 'bare' Harry's kids?
| Reviewed By: Christina G. On: July 18, 2007 02:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't been on this site in a while; but DAMN!, am I glad to check it out. For I have found your wonderful fic. I've got to tell you this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. The way Draco talks about the use of Dark Magic & Blood Magic makes me wonder if maybe there is more honesty\honor in the use of these magics. Since they take such devotion & sacrafice for the caster. While Light Wizards seem more self-rightous & seem to treat magic like a tool and not the living, breathing entity that it is. And I so hope Harry & Draco find their way back to each other. Please update soon.
| Title: Oath Breaker
Reviewed By: TheAlchemist On: July 14, 2007 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautifully written, intriguing, enjoyable. However, you've left out the Sirius Black factor, meaning you didn't take some things into account. Sirius, according to your fic, would have undoubtedly been a dark wizard, even if he was a blood traitor or in denial about it. Lily's protection, being blood magic, would undoubtedly be dark magic in your fic, therefore, Harry's protection was dark magic. His dementor dreams of his parents dying (like Draco's ancestor dreams) would be an effect of dark magic, making Harry a second generation dark wizard (after Lily and his godfather). Harry, using an unforgiveable, practicing dark magic, and taking up with and for a dark wizard would also make him dark. If you refer to him as a convert or not, he's just an ignorant dark wizard. Tonks mother, Andromeda would also be a dark witch in denial in light of this. This would have to be, as earlier, Draco mentioned that one couldn't cease being dark, but light wizards could convert. It'd be great if you addressed these inconsistences in further chapters. It really is a very good fic and I would certainly love to read any additional updates.
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