| "Killer Money" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Nice update!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Glad you got over that block...this was a good one. You WOULD start a cliffy on a lemon...evil girl!
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Reviewed By: robinstar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 08:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
" Um….its not like I don't like seeing a good chest but " Lol, that line had me laughing so hard. Good story. Funny. Hehe, Kagome called Sess Fluffly, lol.
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Title: That was gooood!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 05:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
A couple of spelling errors but nothing major. Love where you're taking this & Inu was hilarious with his "You felt nothing?!" complaint. Keep up the good work!
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Title: Killer money
Reviewed By: inuyasha0777 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo yo yo girl this is tiyt i lived it keep on writening it and you know me make it a long one it is a rilly good story of what iv alreaty read. you are makeing it sound like other storyes that iv read and that is good. yo yo yo keep on writeing this story and more oh and im writeing 3 storyes now not only one and im going to write a nother about the dog i draw and then my dad said he will poblish it so you do the same wirte a story will all new characters ones you made up and pitchers ok and mady my dad will poblish it for you to ok talk latter and keep on writeing i love it im a Killer Monkey and you are Killer Money yo yo yo LoL LOL LoL LOL your friend donnasfor you can call me IYF you are that to bye the way or you could call me Inuyasha0777 bye ... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... .............................................
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Title: Ok -I'm really liking this...
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this start alot. I like the fact that unlike most fics, Kagome seems to really dislike Inu rather than having "secret feelings" but we know that will change ne? There are a couple of spelling mistakes, but extremely minor. I'm ready for an update!
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