| "Loveless Fascination" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: debbiechannotlogged in On: July 22, 2005 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, it took me a while to get to this after you posted it! I was running fever and I wanted to be in my right mind when I reviewed. I... LOVE... IT!!!!! Not only is it IC and plausible, it's smooth, well-written, and all jaunty and interesting. I was only disappointed that there wasn't a hint of smut already :-D The wind-up is slow and fascinating, though. I'm dying to see where you take this!!!! Weeeee! Naked Yamcha and Naked Vegeta. What a lucky Bulma! And oh yes, as always, your sense of humor is stellar. This has great pacing.
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Reviewed By: Jeanna On: July 21, 2005 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry up and Update woman lol I loved it and the good stuff hasant started yet yahoo... cool like you hand can only do so much LMAO! UPDATE NSB >:)
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Reviewed By: rose of vegetasei On: July 21, 2005 15:21 CDT
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You know, I was curious how the topic would come up and how Vegeta would handle it. I'm so intrigued to know what will happen next. BTW: "and he knew she how she felt", I believe this is a typo, remove the first "she". Otherwise, I didn't see any errors. *thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: Mely On: July 21, 2005 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have captured my attention! Very different from other stories that are out there. I hope you will update this story in the future.
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Reviewed By: Goatnjn On: July 20, 2005 23:32 CDT
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I got to hand it to you, you've come up with something origninal. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: desertblue On: July 20, 2005 21:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please write more I have never read a story that would these three together but it is a really good idea and i would like to see what happens
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