| "Loveless Fascination" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: 416516 On: April 14, 2007 18:19 CDT
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part of it was sexy, part of it was funny, and part of it was drop dead shocking. You outdid yourself.
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 07:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was hot, not if, ands or buts about it. A first for me.
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Title: Stellar job
Reviewed By: PLURisdekey [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEWL!!!!!!!!! Too sexy 4 the young ones...
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Title: Continue!
Reviewed By: tin797 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 06:00 CST
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Its too good to stop here! I am dying to know what happens next!
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Title: Loveless Fascination.
Reviewed By: bura400 (not signed in) On: September 11, 2005 10:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought I would not like this, but I clicked on your story anyway. I was not *disappointed*. What an intriguing, ingenious idea. You made it extremely smokin' if I do so say myself, entirely plausible--not to mention in character. A great job for a great fic. Very few errors as well, the ones I saw were already pointed out--so I feel I don't need to. Bura-chan
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Reviewed By: JEANNA On: July 26, 2005 22:42 CDT
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SWWET LORD IN HEAVEN WOMAN WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO DO KILL ME??!! GOD I NEVER...I"LL HAVE SWEET DREAMS TONIGHT AND THEMSOME WOW GAH!!!! COLD SHOWER COLD SHOWER GOD THAT WAS GOOD YIPPE THANK YOU GIRL ...LATER! >:)
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Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 05:46 CDT
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Good grief that was HOT! Oh my! Wonderful work Audra.
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Reviewed By: rose of vegetasei On: July 25, 2005 08:22 CDT
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Is it wrong for me to be jealous of Bulma right now? Ooh, the sweet dreams I can have tonight. ^_^ The descriptions were wonderful and I didn't see any glaring error. The only thing I would suggest is write MORE!!
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Reviewed By: desertblue On: July 24, 2005 21:51 CDT
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write more please I don't care what happens next but something has to happen thankyou anyway if you don't
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Reviewed By: Mely On: July 24, 2005 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great lemon! I like the fact that Bulma is the center of all of their attention. Previous stories that I've read are V/G/B and Goku is the focus. This story was very well written. I'm sure the person you wrote this story for is very pleased. I hope to see more posted stories by you. Maybe you can have Bulma in threesomes with other DBZ characters.
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Title: Loveless Fascination
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 15:46 CDT
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.>. OM WOW I'M I'M SPEACHLESS........^^ UPDATE NOW YOU HEAR ME.... ok now i'm back to normal...great story i want more....
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 12:37 CDT
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!!!!! Weeeee! !!!!!!!!! Nice little moments--like Yamcha's thoughts. His being reluctant and turned on and then not caring that the "alien's" hands somehow landed on his. Great descriptions of pure physicality. "Lied" should be "lay" both times but I didn't mind :P And oh yes, I loved it how Vegeta was in charge of the whole shebang. He just would be, that alien! 8-D Can't wait to see where you're taking this. This was a PRIMO smut chapter.
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Reviewed By: christabel1961 On: July 24, 2005 10:53 CDT
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Wow, wonderful. I can't wait to see where you take this great story. christabeleve
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Reviewed By: Caralin Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 10:20 CDT
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Hurrah! A new Bulma/Vegeta story to sink my teeth into...well it does include Yamcha...but I think I can put up with him for the sake of a good read. I can't wait for the romping to begin! *Praying this does not turn into yaoi between Vegeta and Yamcha* My evil mind sees Bulma and Vegeta having way too much fun to even remember Yamcha is supposed to be joining them...heh...heh...can't blame them...
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: VegetasBabysMama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The whole concept is intriguing. I never imagined, fantasized, daydreamed about Y/B/V having threesome. LOL. But I thought 'Why not?' so I checked it out. To be honest, I thought the whole idea would disgust me (mainly because I'm a big V/B fan), but I figured that the writing would have a major factor in that. If it's well written, then I'm all for it. Some people would have just thrown them in a bed together and that's it, but I think you presented the whole idea very well. There's nothing wrong with, you know, wanting to spice up ones sex life. Haha. I thought Yamcha would rather do it with two girls than share Bulma with another man, but then again, that wouldn't make a very good story. So anyway, I want to see how the story will go, so I ask -nicely- for another chapter.
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