| "Devil And Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: demonsbaby On: April 07, 2010 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite fanfics. I know it's been awhile since you've written anything for it but I wish you would write more. I've been checking every week for an update. So, please write some more.
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Reviewed By: Lirilith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I meant to review earlier, but kept dragging. I've read this story more than a few times at this point and enjoy it every single re-reading. It's very well written and the details draw the reader into the world you've created. The storyline isn't just an excuse for the sex scenes and I want to know what happens just as much as I want the lemons. Giving a hints into the guys backgrounds and how they turned out as they are in the story make it rich in the kind of details that make a story stand out. The way you write the BDSM scenes is incredibly intense and hot. It's nice to have Duo being the agressive top and Heero accepting himself. (He's so hardheaded. Sleeping on his back!) The struggle going on in Duo's mind is really interesting. I also know the storyline involves mostly Duo, Heero and Wufei but the interaction between Wufei and Zechs is a nice side note. I'd also love to know what happened in the first meeting between Devil and Demon! (Maybe a separate side story once this one is done?)I know it's probably work to get into the right mindset to write this kind of story, but please finish it eventually!
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Reviewed By: suseno On: August 11, 2007 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the stories i would love to see completed- the little world created with its rules and characterizations are simply addicting. duo's character is more intricate, and i'm glad there's more done about wufei. he needs more love! as for the world of s&m/bondage, it's a bit darker than what i would expect, but still well presented. liking all the little back stories included. i did notice the time gap between the latest 2 chapters; and i remember reading from one of the earlier chapters that this was completed about 75%. i really hope that this hasn't been abandoned. thanks for sharing and hope to see another chapter installed!
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Reviewed By: Schachzug On: January 06, 2007 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was definately worth it.
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Reviewed By: green_is_lovely On: January 05, 2007 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really nice work on details. really this is one of the more heavy bdsm fics i've read and your portrayl of the blend of dark pleasure and pain is pretty riviting. thanks for sharing and i look forward to your next installment.
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Title: *ravishes the author*
Reviewed By: KrystalFoxx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 00:37 CST
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Oh goody! A fic with everything I like, pain and pleasure. I suppose I should mention the fact that it was written by somebody that has two braincells to rub together is pleasant too. The work is astounding, intelligent, and provoking. It begs questions from the readers and slakes our thirst for some of the darker things in life. My only complaint would be the lack of an ending. But in a way, keeping me wanting like this is following in the true spirit of the fic, no? I'm deeply pleased writers of your caliber are still writing and I look forward to subsequent works.
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Reviewed By: Hikaru Itsuko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 14:47 CST
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I just have to say 'DAMN IT' I never would thought in a plot like this to write a fic, so YAY for you, is really cruel and so violent, but thats the spark to the success of the history, I read all the chapter in one sit, and well I have no words to explain all the feelings xD, well til next chapter
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Reviewed By: cylence [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, very believable, I think it's the best chapter so far. You got to exactly the issues that seemed likely to be Wufei's biggest problems with his situation (at least to me they did). Glad you decided to continue, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: cylence [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, very believable, I think it's the best chapter so far. Glad you decided to continue, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Title: Devil and Demon
Reviewed By: demonsbaby On: April 01, 2006 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is really awesome so far. I haven't written a review until now. But I was waiting for you to add more parts. So please update soon if you can.
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Sandileina [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 11:49 CST
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Amazing. Absolutely stunning. I'm fascinated by the Devil; is he, as Berns thought, a split personality? I didn't think so until I read the part where Heero tells the Devil that Duo is his, and he wants him back when the mission thing is over. Hmm... *strokes imaginary beard* Interesting... I can't wait until that's explained! ^^ Keep on writing, you're doing a fabulous job. I feel so sorry for Berns, but I do think Duo has a (mostly) valid point. He probably wouldn't be nearly so good at his job if he had a cosy home and family to go back to. Though I hate the fact that his daughter had to suffer to... *shivers* Well, can't be helped, I suppose... Update soon!! ~Sandy~
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Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wufei fared as I felt he would. Sulking and lashing out. He's unstable now I can tell. I'm surprised Devil left him alone after behaving that way. I would have thought he would've demanded Wufei's submission after getting it initially. Ah, but Fei's been pushed too hard as it is right? I liek how the five balanced each other during the interrogation. Personally, I liek this Bern's guy. I was almost disappointed he was going to be left out of the fray like that. Haha and Une's bedclothes part was so funny. lol I could only imagine her ire. Again kuds for your excellent writing.
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 17:42 CST
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Wow... that is actually an amazing description of the five of them, if I can believe it... from battle hardened agents to squabbling teenagers in the blink of an eye... literally... That sounds great... I still am not much up to the BDSM, but the other dynamics... they make up for my lack of sadism... wait what lack? I love it all!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wu-butt is being a little hard to get, ne? damning duo so many times *smacks wufei's hands* don't ever say that about duo again *glomps duo* even if he does have a split personality. and what of this vacation? what will happen...something good i hope...and....and....i miss Trieze!! *bawls like a baby* UPDATE or...or....terrible things will come befall upon you...and STUFF! like like hundreds of plot bunnies attack you at once! or...or...gray hairs!! *grins* just to name a few.
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Title: ch 4
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great stuff. Bern is shaping up to be a very interesting character, and some interesting plot development. I liked the way that Duo and Bern interacted. And also Duo and Heero. I thought that you developed their relationship nicely, even though they didn't interact that much. You are managing to develop them as sympathetic characters, even if of questionable...everything. And nice tension with the Devil vs Duo conflict. I would like to see Bern become actively involved in the entertainment, but he would then be left in limbo, unless you managed to pair him up with someone. I'd hate to see him end up in a 1x2 threesome. Maybe Anderson? Tricky. Looking forward to more! ^_^
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