| "Devil And Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 11:34 CDT
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hi again! hmmm...wow. that's all i can say. but i will ask...what does heero plan on doing with that police guy? heero and duo aren't the bad guys...right? is wufei gonna be okay?
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Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 10:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool story. Can't wait to see more!
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Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was more than worth the wait, and I'm glad you wrote it. The tension I felt in Wufei was palpable,a nd when he finally gave in...it was beautiful. I really *felt* it, and it's so hard to convey to you that I did. The intensity of everything, I *felt* it. Duo's change, Heero's actions...it was all realistic and enrapturing. I applaud you on that, and I'd give you a damn award for this fic if I could. You are beyond awesome for writing this and I can't wait for the next chapter. (PS: That scene with the officer and The Devil was hot XD )
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Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 03:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah man you had me on edge this whole fic! I'm hanging by a thread just waiting for the next chapter! This is truly a good fic. You don't fall into cliches and everything you've written is very much believable and visable in my mind. Thank you for this great read so far.
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Title: Devil and Demon
Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, we get to a little more insight into how Duo became the Devil. Also we can that Wufei is very fearful of the Duo's new persona and is not to sure that he will be able to let go and give him what he needs to complete their mission. Everyone seems to be experiencing some sort of inner turmoil. Great chapter. Can't wait to see what you have planned next.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! to clear things up...its not the bdsm...its the pain and drawing blood stuff. i can't say much about it now, i'm sorta starting one fitting that description as soon as i can post again. i like this and the way you went into Duo and Wufei's past. i hope Duo's not too hard on Wufei. I have a soft heart when it comes to torturing the guys. Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 14:57 CDT
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I meant bombayoni4@aim.com
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 14:55 CDT
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oh my email address changed! bombayoi4@aim.com k?
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 14:52 CDT
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wow you must go on with this and continue I love this!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 23:49 CDT
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Oh my God! please keep writing! That was one of the most amazing stories I've ever read, and it's only the first chapter! Do you know an unhealthy amount about BDSM? Because I could use some of that knowledge!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm not into the bdsm scene...but this is good in my opinion. i'm no good at beta-ing so i'll settle for giving you a perfect ten.
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Title: devil and demon
Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Phew!! I am fanning my computer right now after reading this! This chapter was so descriptive and so incredibly hot that I am utterly speechless!! I think that you did a hell of a job descibing Duo's charcter. His maliciousness, overt sexualality, his cruelty. You could literally feel every word jump off of the pages as he possesses or displayed his ownership of Wufei and Heero. It really is a side that you just don't expect to see. Now we have hints that Treize or "Fire" had a hand in training Duo and Heero as well. Boy, I can't wait to read the next chapter of this because so far you are doing an awesome job. I wish that I could be your beta reader just so that each chapter could get out that much faster. Looking forward to reading more again soon.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it! Sorry that was an understatement, I friggin love this! Update soon i have to know what happens next!
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Title: ooooooh
Reviewed By: Sandileina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 10:28 CDT
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Ooh, this sounds really exciting. Madame Hydra's Dominion Road was pretty good... I'm hoping you can live up to her... whatchamacallit... not legacy... I don't know. But you know what I mean, right? ^_^ Please write more! You're on my favourites list.
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 19:40 CDT
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i like it and think you should continue... that all makes sense, because Duo never really showed himself during the war, and Heero never knew himself... that could easily be the outcome..
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