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Title: So Cute
Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, really liking it. Was hoping for a longer chapter...maybe next time? :-D I thought that was cute with the "never give you chocolate" again, I think we've all had moments like that! Can't wait to read more, so glad to hear you're continuing on for some more chapters...keep it coming!
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Title: I Want More!
Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter! And you added fluff -::dances a little jig of happiness::- So darn cute! Why do I have a feeling things are going to get a little heated now? Hee hee! Looking forward to the next chapter, you are doing an awsome job with this!! Sorry, no questions this time, maybe next. ;D
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Reviewed By: Maggie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 14:31 CDT
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Love it! Fluffy goodness...and the last chapter made me hungry for pancakes...hmm. I really like the way they meet and how their confort towards each other grew eventually. The way Inuyasha knocked out Koga was great...I wonder if Inu's in trouble with them now...? And I like how Kagome is getting more relaxed now...less dramatic and more fun and "wee!" My favorite line had to be: The haunting darkness in her eyes was a mistake, and I was going to do everything in my power to correct it....I got shivers from it as well as a total "awww!" moment. ^^ What IS Kagome up to...? lol. Thanks for sharing the story with us! Much love! ^^
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Reviewed By: Sayo124 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay for fluff! Good so far, keep up all the work you put into it. It sure is coming along nicely. Update as soon as you can, pwease? Well, good job, like I said before.
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Title: Welcome Back
Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Welcome Back Laurell-chan! This new chapter was wonderful, and you added fluff!! It was cute, it made my pulse pick up a little, and you still kept it real. Do we get to find out more about Kag and Inu's past? Are you bringing in any more of the original characters, or keeping it down to the three you've used? Will Kouga be coming back, or is he done for the story? I wouldn't mind if he didn't come back, but maybe go into a bit more about his and Kag's past. Your writing is wonderful, and I do enjoy it a lot! Keep up the great writing, and looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: hjksgdfhjf
Reviewed By: supersailorfanner On: October 02, 2005 14:36 CDT
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omfg! this was like, your best chapter ever!!i love how worried and attending inu is...he's so sweet!!! kag and inu are soooo made for each other!!!!! stupid kouga! *bashes kouga over head with pipe* leave inuyasha and kagome alone!!!!!! grrrrr......keep up this excellent writing! your very good! i am looking forward to what will be an excellent next chapter i'm sure.....and take as long as you wnat to!
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 02:17 CDT
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hey! :) i'm really liking this!! I love how you add little hints of the upcoming plot in the stories....i'm thinking i know what happened in inu's past...i'm suspicious at least. but i don't wanna say anything, lol. because it might spoil the story. but please update soon and quickly!! xD
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 16:43 CDT
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All the chapters are very wonderful i hope everyone sees it like me i love to read (as you can see) well soon i will update my story and when i do i hope you R&R plus i hope it is good enough
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i loved the new chapter i hope you update real soon keep up the good work its really a wonderful story keep it up!
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Title: Wow..awsome chapter
Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving your style of writing, and the flow is staying at a good pace. There are a few words here and there that you're switching letters, but nothing too serious. It was good that you wrote down the relationship Kagome had with the abuser, and that you finally said who he was! That was driving me crazy! I can't wait for you to post the next chapter, and thank you for making a strong male character like Inuyasha in this chapter. Where does the story go from here? So anxious to read more!
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 16:18 CDT
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hey i loved your new chapter i hope you update real soon
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 20:29 CDT
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hey i loved your new chapter i hope you write another one real soon. thanks for liking the way i write my reviews
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Reviewed By: Cougiecat On: August 21, 2005 13:35 CDT
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Love the story so far. Looking forward to the next chappie. This last one was pretty exciting :)
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 18:59 CDT
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Hey please update real soon. i loved your new chap. thanks for considering me so kind i am known as a very funny and friendy person
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Reviewed By: Cougiecat On: August 17, 2005 13:20 CDT
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Love the story! looking forward to the next update!
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