| "The Pages of My Life" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Title: Please Update!!
Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2009 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love This story!!! please update!!
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Reviewed By: smiley118 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 12:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please write more. It's a really REALLY good story.
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Reviewed By: Feudal Teller of Tales [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 20:19 CST
Comment/Review:
more please!
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Reviewed By: not signed in pagan_sedjou On: January 25, 2007 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo! I return! Haha! I was offline because of something similar to Kagome's plight. I stopped reading at chapter 4, I think. But now I'm back, and have gotten in touch with my inner warrior goddess. She's awesome... reminds me of Sango. Speaking of, I'm glad Sango finally entered the story. I can assume the fic is still on. I'm still reading. I can't wait for an update! X's and O's! pagan_sedjou
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Title: Very Intense
Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Laurell-chan, wow this chapter was really something else! The scary thing was, what you wrote I have heard people tell me before, so you did a really good job writing the voice of a person in Kagome's and Kouga's minds. Koodles to you my friend! Also, love the reference to the part when Kagome was in the closet looking for a sweater and said "what is he, part huskie?" I laughed at that. Now Kikyou has entered the picture...sort of. I'm dying to know where you're going with that. BTW, if you ever need research info or whatnot, let me know and I can give you tons of stuff. If you can, hurry and post the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow the beginning of the chapter was horrific. What a force to be reckoned with. It doesn't seem like there is any end to this besides him killing Kagome that would satisfy him in the least. The second half of the chapter was so though. She's wanting to find comfort, but it the arms of someone with a mysterious past who keeps it from her. Wow...you're right, the plot is thickening, JUICY! Thanks!
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Title: Looking Forward to the Next One
Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
These were pretty good, the plot is defiently going a lot faster now! I had to reread a couple parts over, but I like the story! Just a minor, anal comment from me...she could get a restraining order, but an Order of Protection would be better 'cause she and Kouga dated before. I am looking forward to the next chapter! Write on my dear, write on!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: July 11, 2006 20:33 CDT
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What is he doing there? why did he have to mess up a good night?Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 03:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay, I absolutely love this story. I really enjoy the two perspectives. It really adds a lot of depth to the characters and makes it so much more fun to see two different takes on the same events. I'm really enjoying Inuyasha's character and the elaborate backstory for him. I anticipate finding out more. I also can't wait to hear about Kagome's past since it seems like there's a lot going on there. I absolutely loved the little flipping off the shirt scene, so funny, definitely something does when one is drinking. Sango and Miroku's characters are also great and you've done a really great job of setting them up for interesting stories as well and I look forward to you revealing it all in due time. At any rate, the story is great and you're a fantastic writer..everything is very clear and deliberate and I enjoy that. I eagerly await your next update!! ;)
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: July 06, 2006 21:12 CDT
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I would love to go to a fondue restaurant. I sounds like fun. Anyway Miroku has been very good through the whole chapter.And a party @ Inuyasha's house is the perfect way to end any night. Great story! Please write a new chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: britlovesanime On: June 30, 2006 14:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
love the story.please update asap. thank you
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Title: Fondue licking good!
Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I want to say welcome back Laurell-chan. It's been too long without you. Then I wanted to say I loved the chapter with the fondue. That was cute, and you're right fondue is so good and so much fun. I admit that I am really, really looking forward to the next chapter, with the movies and drinking. Are secrets and stories going to come out? I would love to see what you do with Sango, plus if you have Inuyasha bring up stuff from his past, maybe a past love history or family, or something totally left field. Maybe do something outrageous with Miroku. Since your story is not the typical Inuyasha tale, you should have fun with creating the characters pasts. Good luck to you, can't wait to read the next part...please write soon! Also, and I know I am getting annoying with this, but is there going to be fluff soon? Sorry, can't help it!
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Reviewed By: super_sailor_fanner. On: June 17, 2006 06:01 CDT
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very nice idea to have them in a fondue restaurant, it really sets a mood. i love this chapter, keep up this excellent work, can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: February 27, 2006 15:47 CST
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they're awfully cute together yay! i guess you're just revising? but it's new to me. update soon puleease
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: December 24, 2005 16:50 CST
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AAAAHHHHHHH! They are so cute. Kagome all happy now grining from ear to ear. I wish I had that. O well! Please write soon.
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