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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: July 11, 2006 20:33 CDT Comment/Review: What is he doing there? why did he have to mess up a good night?Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 03:32 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Yay, I absolutely love this story. I really enjoy the two perspectives. It really adds a lot of depth to the characters and makes it so much more fun to see two different takes on the same events. I'm really enjoying Inuyasha's character and the elaborate backstory for him. I anticipate finding out more. I also can't wait to hear about Kagome's past since it seems like there's a lot going on there. I absolutely loved the little flipping off the shirt scene, so funny, definitely something does when one is drinking. Sango and Miroku's characters are also great and you've done a really great job of setting them up for interesting stories as well and I look forward to you revealing it all in due time. At any rate, the story is great and you're a fantastic writer..everything is very clear and deliberate and I enjoy that. I eagerly await your next update!! ;)
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: July 06, 2006 21:12 CDT Comment/Review: I would love to go to a fondue restaurant. I sounds like fun. Anyway Miroku has been very good through the whole chapter.And a party @ Inuyasha's house is the perfect way to end any night. Great story! Please write a new chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: britlovesanime On: June 30, 2006 14:03 CDT Comment/Review: love the story.please update asap. thank you
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Title: Fondue licking good! Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 16:12 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: First I want to say welcome back Laurell-chan. It's been too long without you. Then I wanted to say I loved the chapter with the fondue. That was cute, and you're right fondue is so good and so much fun. I admit that I am really, really looking forward to the next chapter, with the movies and drinking. Are secrets and stories going to come out? I would love to see what you do with Sango, plus if you have Inuyasha bring up stuff from his past, maybe a past love history or family, or something totally left field. Maybe do something outrageous with Miroku. Since your story is not the typical Inuyasha tale, you should have fun with creating the characters pasts. Good luck to you, can't wait to read the next part...please write soon! Also, and I know I am getting annoying with this, but is there going to be fluff soon? Sorry, can't help it!
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Reviewed By: super_sailor_fanner. On: June 17, 2006 06:01 CDT Comment/Review: very nice idea to have them in a fondue restaurant, it really sets a mood. i love this chapter, keep up this excellent work, can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: February 27, 2006 15:47 CST Comment/Review: they're awfully cute together yay! i guess you're just revising? but it's new to me. update soon puleease
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: December 24, 2005 16:50 CST Comment/Review: AAAAHHHHHHH! They are so cute. Kagome all happy now grining from ear to ear. I wish I had that. O well! Please write soon.
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Title: So Cute Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 12:20 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Good, really liking it. Was hoping for a longer chapter...maybe next time? :-D I thought that was cute with the "never give you chocolate" again, I think we've all had moments like that! Can't wait to read more, so glad to hear you're continuing on for some more chapters...keep it coming!
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Title: I Want More! Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 17:17 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awsome chapter! And you added fluff -::dances a little jig of happiness::- So darn cute! Why do I have a feeling things are going to get a little heated now? Hee hee! Looking forward to the next chapter, you are doing an awsome job with this!! Sorry, no questions this time, maybe next. ;D
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Reviewed By: Maggie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 14:31 CDT Comment/Review: Love it! Fluffy goodness...and the last chapter made me hungry for pancakes...hmm. I really like the way they meet and how their confort towards each other grew eventually. The way Inuyasha knocked out Koga was great...I wonder if Inu's in trouble with them now...? And I like how Kagome is getting more relaxed now...less dramatic and more fun and "wee!" My favorite line had to be: The haunting darkness in her eyes was a mistake, and I was going to do everything in my power to correct it....I got shivers from it as well as a total "awww!" moment. ^^ What IS Kagome up to...? lol. Thanks for sharing the story with us! Much love! ^^
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Reviewed By: Sayo124 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 20:31 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Yay for fluff! Good so far, keep up all the work you put into it. It sure is coming along nicely. Update as soon as you can, pwease? Well, good job, like I said before.
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Title: Welcome Back Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 20:33 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Welcome Back Laurell-chan! This new chapter was wonderful, and you added fluff!! It was cute, it made my pulse pick up a little, and you still kept it real. Do we get to find out more about Kag and Inu's past? Are you bringing in any more of the original characters, or keeping it down to the three you've used? Will Kouga be coming back, or is he done for the story? I wouldn't mind if he didn't come back, but maybe go into a bit more about his and Kag's past. Your writing is wonderful, and I do enjoy it a lot! Keep up the great writing, and looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: hjksgdfhjf Reviewed By: supersailorfanner On: October 02, 2005 14:36 CDT Comment/Review: omfg! this was like, your best chapter ever!!i love how worried and attending inu is...he's so sweet!!! kag and inu are soooo made for each other!!!!! stupid kouga! *bashes kouga over head with pipe* leave inuyasha and kagome alone!!!!!! grrrrr......keep up this excellent writing! your very good! i am looking forward to what will be an excellent next chapter i'm sure.....and take as long as you wnat to!
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 02:17 CDT Comment/Review: hey! :) i'm really liking this!! I love how you add little hints of the upcoming plot in the stories....i'm thinking i know what happened in inu's past...i'm suspicious at least. but i don't wanna say anything, lol. because it might spoil the story. but please update soon and quickly!! xD
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