| "Suffocating" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
Reviewed By: Tricia1224 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonerful story so far. It has been a while since you last updated this. I will admit that I am a little disappointed that this story was left. It is definately a story that has the potential to be great. I hope you pick it back up eventually. So far it is a great story. I can feel the emotions. I hope you pick this story back up I really would like to know what happens between Kagome and Sesshomaru. I also want to know what Naraku has planned. Have a great day.
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Reviewed By: serena_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 12:04 CDT
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awsome cant wait for the next chapter ¢¾
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Title: Terrific Fic
Reviewed By: SkyMaster [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You absolutely must update this wonderful piece of literature as soon as possible. Aside from lack of new content, I can't find one single thing to criticize. It's very excellent work indeed.
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLease continue this story. it is such a wonderfull story, and i cant bear to not finish it.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 13:49 CDT
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great story. i never noticed you updated so it was a pleasent shock when reviewing my favorite collumns. i should so be in class...but...this is far more interesting. hehe. anyway, i'm glad to see you are continuing with the story. just how does Kagome tell Sesshiles that she is forceablly mated to naraku? damn...talk about an awkward conversation. @_@ . anyway. i love your description, it's so...conveying. i can see it all (and it hurts at points, poor kagome!) but it is so well written. great story!
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Title: Suffocating
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 14:27 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Suffocating
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 18:06 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (not signed in) On: August 30, 2005 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is really great. It is so frustrating to see her go through all that and come so close to either freedom or friends and have it torn away again. Very sad but very good. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to see what happens next, especially with sess in the pic... ^_~
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Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 12:44 CDT
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latidatida... -waits for next chapter- latidatida.....
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 21:43 CDT
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hey i was wondering if you can please write another chapter real soon. i can't wait to read and review more of your story thanks again
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Title: Suffocating
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 16:16 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i loved your story i hope you write real soon. it was awesome. oh and please R&R my story moonlight eyes Oh my name is Nyah. I am 15 and i spend most of my time reading and reviewing lovely stories like yours. and did i say your story is very great. email me at krystalclearkiss@yahoo.com when you update thanks alot. please update real soon. lata
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Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 12:21 CDT
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hehehe ^_^ Anyways, I hope kagome gets a break soon, i feel so bad for her! i LOVE this story by the way. It's so sad and emotional but it is also just so good! ^_^
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Reviewed By: XX_Blue_Lips_XX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 22:23 CDT
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blah blag
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Title: Suffocating
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 01:06 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: shanana-cant login On: August 04, 2005 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job again!
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Reviewed By: shanana-cant login On: August 04, 2005 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow..... im just so entrhralled with this story, your descriptions are so percise and so vivid.... this is truely a sad but beautiful story, i love it! ic ant wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Aphae On: July 30, 2005 08:23 CDT
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Oh, please don't forget about this story, like the authors of all the other ones I like do. I am addicted. So please please please please please put up a new chapter soon, quickly followed by another! This is such a wonderfully written story! I love it!
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Reviewed By: snowluva420 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
How incredibly sad! I hope you update soon for this is an outstanding story!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: July 28, 2005 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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very interesting. i'm really looking forward to the next chapter. wow. that's deep. poor kagome, that's really rough. damn naraku. i'm glad to see that after nearly six years that the inu gang is still intact. i want to punch inu through the screen though for his normal 'i love you kikyo...boo hoo, i didn't get to tell kagome i really loved her' routine. GRRRR. sesshiles huh? hmm. not to sure but lets just see how this turns out. i note the (we'll see for how long) clause you stuck on that in the beginning. hmm. even more interesting. you have hit the characters pretty good in description. i think you should really push though more memories from what she missed with teh group when discussing inu and the gang. maybe more of how they felt after she died or stuff that has changed. also...and maybe it's just me...but i know that if i had been held in a foreign land for six years as a sex slave the first thing i would try to do was to go home. i would consider her trying teh well to escape back, or justify why she doesn't want to do that. obviously, right now, seh can't casue well, she's kind of dead (...tisk tisk...stupid girl...) but yeah...GREAT FRIGGIN story!!!
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Reviewed By: Fried deer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all: Thank you so much for writing this fic! One af my favorits^_^!Í haven't seen this plot before, and that's saying something considering I've many fanfics^_^ There's only one bad thing I have rigth now, and that is something about your spelling: All the time you write women and this means severel females (pluralis), but what you should use is woman : only one female ^_^ Keep on going! I really like your fic^_~ PS. Which nationality are you? (just interested^_^)
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Reviewed By: Yashagal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 10:17 CDT
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I like this story. Good plotline. I do hope this does end happy. Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Hentai Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 06:56 CDT
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This story made me cry...kagome has suffered so much can't you give her a break. An what happened to that stupid walking corpse and the puppy. What about Sango, miroku, kirara, and shippo. Will kags get together with sesshy? Update soon kay!
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Title: pixieme
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 15:48 CDT
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So sad, I do hope this has a happy ending. Update soon, its a good story!
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