| "Family Ties" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: yuni On: August 19, 2005 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please hurry and update.
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Reviewed By: Mortem [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so far! Update SOON!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Mana On: July 23, 2005 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very well written. although it was wierd how it when into italics, but it was really good! i enjoyed it! i hope to read more soon! what got me curious is...are you using the fact that Akito is a boy or a girl (it's a proven fact that he's a girl in the Manga...creepy) anyways, i enjoyed this story alot! Add more! Arigatou and Ja ne!
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