| "Doll Parts" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: dudette [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 11:55 CDT
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plz keep going plz
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Reviewed By: Chelle On: August 13, 2005 17:17 CDT
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Wow, I'm seriously in love with this story. I'm begging you; update soon PLEASE!!!! It's an incredibly original story and it's truly enjoyable. Don't stop writing.
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Reviewed By: dudette [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it plz keep going..
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 00:54 CDT
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I first started reading this on AFF and I have to say that I am in awe of your writing. It's like I can actually feel Kagome's emotions. I look forward to reading more chapters
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Reviewed By: dudette [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 14:04 CDT
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I love it. Normally I only read fan fics that are 1 page so I can follow along..but this I couldnt stop reading. Please keep writing. Btw your writing is very good the way you describe Kagome's feelings and Inuyasha's appearance. And I love how you made Inuyasha goth. This is very different from any fan fic I have ever read and probably the best...please continue and this speed is very very good. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: neng On: July 28, 2005 17:28 CDT
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i think that this fic is wonderfully written. the way the music blends with the scene of the day. i love the way kagome is written. like a real human. and i love inuyasha... i await for the next installment
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Title: wow....
Reviewed By: LordFluffysMate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow you like Hole too? all my friends dont like them but i love the song doll parts!!! ^_^ keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: Sirens-Melody [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 16:21 CDT
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LOVE THE NEWWW CHAPTERRRR!!!!
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think is a good story I hope you up date soon I like to read more of your story.
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Reviewed By: Sirens-Melody [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like where this story is heading. It shows a lot of depth. And I think that it is great that you aren't going to rush the story by putting inuyasha and kagome together right off the bat. Your not trying to rush the story which most writers do and in the process make the plot too rushed and the story ends up bad. I like it and I can't wait to read more. Great work of art you have going right now. I wish you the best of luck.
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Reviewed By: Fetal_Barbiedoll90 On: July 22, 2005 16:05 CDT
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i haven't even finished this yet,but i had to stop and write b4 i forget.the reason i clicke don your story is because(though i hate courtney love as a person)i love Hole,and that is my favorite song by them 'cause it was based off of a love letter she wrote to Kurt Cobain.just had to say that.i am going to finish reading it now.so far,your story rocks.i love stuff like this.keep up the good work!
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