| "Solar Moon and Celestial Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon Deux [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 00:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yo, it is still an okay story, I like it a little bit still don't like the pairings of Kikyo and InuYasha that is just wierd to me, oh yeah gay mediaminer deleted my old accout for stupid chat fics so i started anew, I got one story up right now just check it out and give an honest review no one else seems to want to.
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE!!! PLZ!!!!!!!!!! CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
the chapters could be longer (style of writing). numerous spelling and grammatical errors, primarily with sentence structure and punctuation (spelling and grammar). a lot of x-overs for sm and inu but not many of them are very original. this one starts out with a unique idea. hopefully it keeps going in that direction. btw, love the kikyo/inuyasha pairing. kagome/sesshomaru...not a big fan but i'll still read them ^_^. (originality/creativity, enjoyment factor). update soon ^^.
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Reviewed By: Cold Kikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 21:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter,i like it, ^_^
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Reviewed By: Cold Kikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 21:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
great chapter,i like it ^_^
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Reviewed By: Cold Kikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really great,i like it.Can't wait for the next chapter.Update soon:)
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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 12:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
White Wolf of the Moon: Hummmmmm let me see what i have for you. Wolf: We have a big sak of no. Loup: Yes we don't like kikyo and InuYasha perings. Ray: they piss uss off. White Wolf of the Moon: Very much. Oh yess by the way hello again and i will now intro my friends or so called yamis. Wolf Loup Ookami *not here* Ray and rays sister Sita. That is all but if you change it around this will really be better for me, but you be the authoress you decide.
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