| "The miracle of life" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 06:44 CDT
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This story was nice, but i think that you should have made it longer, oh well. Anyway write some more, its a good story.
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Title: The Miracle Of Life
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 00:14 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 13:44 CDT
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Good chappie, on the short side tho, I hope that the next chappies are longer, update soon please
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Reviewed By: Reke [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 10:28 CDT
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon!
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 11:59 CDT
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LUV UR STORY PLEASE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!!!!=)
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Reviewed By: Tormented Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 19:58 CDT
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Hey that was pretty good, but it was short, and you don't need the "Miroku's POV", "Inuyasha's POV" and "Normal" in there; just let the readers know that they are thinking. But it was a really good chapter! Just work on what I said. But please don't think I'm being mean about it, I'm trying to help. XOXO Tormented Hanyou
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