Reviewed By: EmpressGalaxia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2002 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job. You have smooth transitions between narrations, which can get tricky in a multi-narrative fic. I would have liked to know a little more about Nanami's rise to power, though using her as a villain was very original. Good job, fanboy. Hey people! Read this! =^..^= |
