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| "I Choose My Path" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Banana Gurl (when logged in. *nods*) On: August 22, 2005 14:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like your plot so far... it's very interesting. :) Please update soon since I can't seem to think of anything else to say.
| Title: suggestion
Reviewed By: sybyl On: July 25, 2005 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfiction! Oh, please write more! Well, I have a suggestion for how rough it will be between her and Kakashi, since she destroyed his book. You could have him glare at her all the time and ignore her and eventually it makes herdesprate for some other kind of attention other than his anger and hatred. So, she goes to the store and buys him a new one and wraps it in pretty orange wrapping paper! Hehe, just a suggestion. Hope I have helped at least a little! Keep up the great work!
| Title: hi! ^^
Reviewed By: crowekris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
w00t! I absolutely LOVE your story! write more pleesies!! Hmm...I'd have to say my favourite part of this is the last part you left off with. I'm one for lots of drama and traumatic happenings, so naturally anything like that was catch me. Although, I am also one for humour, and those little skits between you and Kakashi actually brought a smirk to my face! That's kinda hard to accomplish! Hmmm...your OC is the type of character I'd create and I can relate to her, which is probably another reason why I love this so much. Very nice work with the character. Well, I'll quit boring you now. Please write more soon! I can't wait to see the upcoming events! ~crowekris
| Title: hi! ^^
Reviewed By: crowekris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
w00t! I absolutely LOVE your story! write more pleesies!! Hmm...I'd have to say my favourite part of this is the last part you left off with. I'm one for lots of drama and traumatic happenings, so naturally anything like that was catch me. Although, I am also one for humour, and those little skits between you and Kakashi actually brought a smirk to my face! That's kinda hard to accomplish! Hmmm...your OC is the type of character I'd create and I can relate to her, which is probably another reason why I love this so much. Very nice work with the character. Well, I'll quit boring you now. Please write more soon! I can't wait to see the upcoming events! ~crowekris
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