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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 16:10 CST
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This is so totally worth the wait! Let me tell you, I like stories with unattractive Duo getting attractive Heero (though this is the first one I've ever read) lol. Anyway, I totally agree with love creating beauty. I love how Zechs is so kind in this fic. LOL! Oh my GOD! The dream! That was totally unexpected, but amazingly funny! PS - Did you know there's something wrong with your quotation marks. You've got two sets of 99s instead of a 66 and a 99.
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Reviewed By: RebelNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um not to bother you but if you don't mind could you please write the next chapter and post it
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Reviewed By: KuboTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 07:04 CST
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Sorry i havent revieuwt sooner, anyway another lovely chap ^.~
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 19:52 CDT
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Maybe it would be a stretch to actually like him, but I do feel a lot of pity for him... he did get cheated out by the man he was in love with.... Stupid Howard.... Poor drunk old man...
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Title: Blair here again
Reviewed By: Jeminacat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 01:17 CDT
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Sorry I havent reviewed lately. I havent had any internet service for a quite some time. So I've caught up on chapters and I'm still really liking this fic. Its all with the woo. I'm really digging how Duo is learning all of this from those boxes he found. It's really cool. Sorry if I seem to be repeating myself, its alittle late. Just wanted to let you know that I was still reading and still loved it.
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Reviewed By: Dragongirl85 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 12:05 CDT
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It's a me, Mario! Lol, just kidding with you. It's me, Hanne. ^^ I've just sat down and read the first two chapters of your story and I must say that's it has really caught my interest. I've never seen Duo been written like that before and I find it very interesting. Lol, I hafta add a zit to my own Duo too if I wanna make him look more real. After all, I've barely passed 20 and have just recently gotten rid of my own zits. ^^ Anyway, back to buisness. I didn't get the chance to read it all, I don't have the time tonight, but what I've read so far is very good. I can't wait to sit down and read the rest and more! Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: Alea On: September 21, 2005 08:41 CDT
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AAARG..NUUU..now i wanna know more...arg! Update soon?
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 09:51 CDT
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Wow! I didn't think that Septum could be portrayed like that! It actually makes me want to like him... maybe... Anyway I want you to continue and soon!
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Reviewed By: Coran On: September 19, 2005 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incredible story, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: mamajen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything in this is so original! I love it! I am impressed by your characterization of Duo. I also like the new twist you have added with Duo's uncle. Can't wait for more.
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Title: Ugly
Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Three cheers!! I was so glad to see that this story has been updated and by several chapters too! Thanks for the praise, I've often thought about writing, but I just haven't gotten up the nerve yet. But, I love reading the stories by you guys and it is a constant source of inspiration for me to pursue it. Now, on to Duo. It looks like Trowa and Quatre will just ahve to agree to disagree or just admit that they are attracted to one another. As for Duo we can clearly see that he is leaning more toward Heero, but it looks like he really enjoys being around all of the guys, especially Wufei. Noin, on the other hand is just terrible! I think that it would be a very bad mistake for Zechs to marry her. Now we've gained a little bit more insight into Duo's Uncle Spetum. Poor man! It looks like he had very strong feelings for this man only to be used and tossed to the side when he got what he wanted. How sad for him. But, it looks like Duo is going to try to confront him. Well, in any case I'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out. It is nice to see though that he slowly but surely trying to come out of his shell and haviong friends will definely help him out more. As always this story is a pleasure to read so please update soon.
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Title: Hey Alea here...
Reviewed By: KuboTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 03:54 CDT
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OOh pls pls pls dont make us wait to long ur story i sow good i check atleast 3 times a day if its updated...kinda sad aint it?
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Title: Oooh!
Reviewed By: GladAngel On: August 18, 2005 02:34 CDT
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Ooooh! That opening for the chapter! Maybe some 3x4 action? I hope! I wonder what Duo will find in the box and the safe? Maybe his mom will find money to cure his acne? I always thought that his mother was kind of ignorant to his acne problems but I guess not. I feel so sad for Duo for feeling frightened to go over to WuFei's home. He's afraid of what they'll think of him when they see him...oh that must be a terrible and terrifying feeling! I'm anticipating the future chapters, I hope some relationships form -oh, also that Zechs gets with WuFei, I don't actually paticulary like that pairing but it works in your story, I love that. Oh, one more thing, sorry with all the abreviations and the 'S.C.' ('Sister Quatre' I'm hoping you got that?) my sister was breathing down my neck ^-^
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Reviewed By: Alea On: August 14, 2005 18:20 CDT
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I absolutly adore your story! I cant wait for the update i love it!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 12:57 CDT
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I always try to review a story chapter for chapter... It makes the author feel better, and me feel better... keep going, okay?
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